A Twist in my Story - Comments

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I-You- What?? How did that even-- Oh, my gosh. Talk about a sudden ending. I cannot wait for the sequel to this.

Nooo that wasn't supposed to happen!! Seriously thoughy, your writing skills are excellent.

when i said 'when things die down.' i didnt mean it literally. update i say

HE KILLED ROSE!!! THAT MOTHERFING FUCK!!!! IMMA KILL THAT FUCKING BASTARD!!! HE WILL DIE!!! UPDATE

i forgive you. take as much time as you need but update when things die down

Ohmygod. I really love this update!

It's Kay, don't worry about it.
School should come first. :)
I wish you good luck, don't think about the audience just focus on the character you're playing.

I think for the sequel you could do a mix of both POVs.
So you can understand how each are feeling?
Lovin' it soooo far :3 xx

i say do both caleb is super awesome but i do wunder what's in the mind of xander so both update

Xander's:)

Either way, a sequel would be awesome!! Tho Xander's perspective would be cool to see since there's not a ton known about him.

i pick xanders pov! :)

I'd say to do Xander's POV because we've already seen Calebs so it'd be nice and refreshing to see Xanders

Awwwwwhhhhhhhhh. So cute. :)

i think, if you made a sequel it would be better if you kept it in Caleb's POV....
idk why i just do.
amazing story! keep it up!!

xxMorgan

update please it's getting good. update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. i wuv it so much. pwease pwease also that teacher's a bitch. what if he told her that the dude in the picture was his abusive dad???? how would she react?? damn update

SO GOOD!! XD
Can't wait for the next update! xx

oh good you had me paniced for a second. good i like it yeah. UPDATE!! i think i comment that too much. lol

So this story is the first thing I check for updates when I get up. Seriously I LOVE it. Keep updating!