The Quintessence of Macy Jensen - Comments

I loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel. :)

YEAH THIS WAS REALLY NICE.
and cute.
and awh.
and shucks.
and adorable c:

Nobody said anything though, which I was happy about, for Macy’s sake. She didn’t really need to hear all of the shit that could be coming our way, that I knew.

Then I did something I don’t really regret and I found myself being stuck on the bench in punishment with Tyler glaring my way with a towel pressed against his bloodied nose.

My favorite parts of the chapter. :)

OOH, SNAP.
YOU DEFEND YO' GIRL, BRETT!
U GO QRL!
hehehoho. please update soon c:
I LOVE HOW HE PUNCHED TYLER'S FACE.

I can't understand why Macy is such a freak even though she is basically like everyone else except she's quiet and wears sweaters all the time. That's not enough reason to consider somebody a freak. Also, Brett's inner monologue is always a bit too flowery. I know guys can have a sensitive side, but being who Brett is I can't imagine it being that flowery. Just some things I noticed, I hope this wasn't too harsh.

AWH, I'm glad his friends are being mature, and happy for him! :D
it really makes my day.
WAIT
that was the end
wait what
SHDFKLASHDFLKASJD
subscribing to the sequel.
for sure.

This story is amazing :) at first I really hated Brett but now since he admitted his feelings I'm liking him now aha I just hope he doesn't break Macy's heart again. That would be very cruel. Anyhow I hope the school accepts he is dating Macy's cuz if they don't dammm drama aha update soon :)

I love the new chapter(: It's amazing!
He better not hurt her ever again, she's too good for that(:

*Squeal* yayy there together :D jdsflaewjiorfaefd that's how I felt when I read this chapter :D
I just hope he doesn't fuck it up again -___- Keep up the good work!!!

oh this is cuuuuuuuuuuute c:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

if you do a sequel i will love you fo life.<3

they're finally together!
WOOOOOT!!
Brett's still an asshole though, I hope he tells his friends soon! I don't want them hiding their relationship D:
I wonder if Macy's really going to listen to her mother and change her styles.
-love the update!

I love this story(:
And since at the end of every chapter it says NO SILENT READERS!
I've decided not to be silent.
I completely love Macy's character, she's so shy and sweet, it's pretty refreshing to see someone like her.
Brett's an asshole. All there is to that.
And I hope you do update again tonight(:

So... I totally subscribed the minute I read "watching Supernatural" I love that show. <3

I don't think Brett's an asshole. In fact I favor him. I think Macy is a little to weak and whiny. Your layout, is so hard for me to read, I have to keep it at default. So that was my little critique for that chapter.

Amazing story!!
I can't wait to know what happens next, hopefully something exciting that would make Brett regret what he did to Macy!

Wow. Brett is such an asshole.
Macy didn't deserve that to happen to her.

What an absolute ass. He needs to get his head out of the freakin' ass !! I feel so bad for Macy, he's gonna regret what he just did, I can tell. Please update again soon !! <3

Wow, Brett, you are a jerk.
Loving the impending drama his actions will cause though.
Poor Macy.

No no no! You can't end a chapter on that! I need to know what's going to happen, poor Macy.