I really like this story! Your characters seem real, which nice, coz in a lot of peoples stories their characters are flat and you can't relate to them. I wish I had someone like Todd. There's just a few things, for example, it looks like you write really fast, coz sometimes your letters get switched around and stuff.Maybe just proofread it slowly before you post it? Also, the story seems real, which is why im sorry for you. You probably need... first hand experience to write it this detailed and this accurate.