The Day He Found the Gun - Comments

  • ForeverandAlways9934

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    OMG PLEASE KEEP GOING!! <3
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • ryan.berch

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    This is sooooooo beautiful!!!!!!!! I love it :)
    January 14th, 2013 at 06:30am
  • ofmiceandmakayla

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    Wow. That was intense, I love it.
    January 13th, 2013 at 07:00am
  • brookylady

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    I love this<3 its completely relatable to so many people. amazing
    January 13th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • ForeverandAlways9934

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    THIS IS SO GOOD.
    September 18th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • ofmiceandmakayla

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    This is reaaalllyyyy good!! Please continue it! :D
    September 18th, 2012 at 02:39am
  • Striped Grey Gloves

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    I really like this story! Your characters seem real, which nice, coz in a lot of peoples stories their characters are flat and you can't relate to them. I wish I had someone like Todd. There's just a few things, for example, it looks like you write really fast, coz sometimes your letters get switched around and stuff.Maybe just proofread it slowly before you post it? Also, the story seems real, which is why im sorry for you. You probably need... first hand experience to write it this detailed and this accurate.

    <3 Amy
    May 1st, 2012 at 06:02am