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  • Gentle Whisper

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    It's cute, I loved it. I'll definitley be reading on. There are no spelling mistakes that I can see - which is good!
    November 5th, 2012 at 08:06pm
  • BrandyHeartss2013

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    I love this story!!!!! one of the few stories I decided to hop back on my mibba account and catch up on it of course I had to read the ending. i was happy when it was finally completed!!!! And even more excited that I remembered my account information to log in to get a hold of it!!!!!!! Thank you so much for including me in the thank you :D! I was shock!!!!! :D! You are welcome personally if this was a movie I'd say leave it alone its perfect but shoot your a good writer I'm interetested in seeing a sequeal :D
    September 28th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • Daydreamer09

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    I am around halfway through, and this is adorable. The whole story is just so sweet, and so lovely and easy to read - the writing just flows along so easily and is beautiful in how simple and yet how emotive it is. The characterisation is really good too - Cassidy and Aden seem like real people. I really like this!
    August 22nd, 2012 at 06:31pm
  • Emiwk

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    I spent my entire night reading this and then Palm Trees! It's such an amazing story, it's absolutely adorable. :))
    August 7th, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    The first thought I had was…oh my goodness. That’s A LOT of chapters to go through O-O but as I started reading, I have to admit it is very well written, sweet and just…all around amazing writing. I honestly hope you keep it up. I haven’t made it to even half way yet, but I will be back to finish!
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • daughter

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    Only halfway through, BUT OH MY FUCKING GOD. I'M IN LOVE AND FEEL LIKE SOBBING. So, so, so sososososososooooooo sweet. I just finished chapter 28, favorite chapter so far, and am dying with adoration. So cute. I can't wait to get to the rest of the story. Such an amazing tale.
    April 25th, 2012 at 10:17pm
  • jackiesawonder

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    Okay, I've read this story- from the beginning to the end, and I must applaud you. This was so well written, the idea and the way you carried out the plot was flawless. The ending hit me like a wave of bricks and I read this aloud to my best guy friend (just because he was on the line) and we were both in shock at your skill. So, seriously, you tell me when you get this published, I'll buy the first copy and read it over another hundred times. Absolute perfection.
    March 27th, 2012 at 04:01am
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    i cried so hard at the end, i would love to read the sequel. i spent 3 hours reading all of this and thought it was the cutest thing ever. At the end i started balling my eyes out. i love this story so much!
    March 26th, 2012 at 11:52am
  • Teddi Manni

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    ALL HELL HAS RAISED LOSE AND I FREAKING DIED.

    That is one hell of an ending. I would have been so sad if you ended it like that and it would have sucked if there wasn't a sequel. But despite that, that last chapter would have been quite a think-hard cliffy to the entire story without a sequel.

    But there is one and a slight chance this poor girl will find love! :D you are quite the writer, love.
    March 20th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • Teddi Manni

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    It's odd...I read chapter 55 while listening to "Love is Not a Fight" by Warren Barfield.

    I cried! Great job! Just one more chapter and I can read Palm Trees!
    March 20th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • Teddi Manni

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    OH.
    MY.
    GOSH.

    THEY DID IT.

    AND I JUST DIED.
    March 20th, 2012 at 12:25am
  • Teddi Manni

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    Wow. You just really like making your stories depressing don't you? Although, I do like the oil-slide idea ROTFL
    March 20th, 2012 at 12:07am
  • Teddi Manni

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    Whoa, I just got confused. He said that he didn't want to...

    And then he was all like, I don't want to hurt her.
    How would he do that? I don't get it! Explain!
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? YOU GET MY HOPES UP AND NOW I'M F*CKING ON THE GROUND CRYING BECAUSE APPARENTLY THIS DUMB A**HOLE AS A GIRLFRIEND.

    LIFE SUCKS. ='(
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    MORE RAPE!

    OMG! I AM SCREAMING LIKE A LITTLE GIRL BECAUSE HE GOT HER THAT SHELL WITH A SIMPLE NOTE INSIDE! SO CUTE! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE (err...read?) THEM GET TOGETHER FOREVER AND MARRY AND HAVE KIDS AND BE ALL LOVEY DOVEY AND SH*T.

    okay. i'm done.
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:45pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    WARNING: DON'T BE ANNOYED WITH THESE RAPID COMMENTS.

    IT IS JUST MY OBSESSION SHOWING BECAUSE THIS STORY IS AWESOME.

    Poor girl, he didn't send her a freaking email. Men. So rude. HAHA, it's all good, he's moving not like he doesn't like her right?

    Oh man, tell me he doesn't stop liking her!
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    SHE BETTER F*CKING PUSH HIM INTO THE SHACK AND GIVE HIM A BLOWJOB!

    Kidding. XD I really like how you made 'Cassette Tape' (haha) such a realistic teenager. I can totally relate to her, me likey!
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:35pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    "Oh god, where's a gun."

    You really make my day, Smoothies :) I love you!!! Off to chapter forty-two!
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:31pm
  • MyBlackDahlia

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    Oh, I loved this story so damn much. Please consider publishing it. I think it would be an amazing book to read. <3
    March 17th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • iRawrPurplePandas

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    Aww!! This was such an amazing story!! I loved it so much and I really can't wait to read Palm Trees!!
    March 11th, 2012 at 07:44am
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