Seashells - Comments

I finished this story at like - 1 am in the morning last night. I lost some sleep but in my opinion it was so completely worth it, because I haven't read a good story on mibs in a loooong time! (: 'Seashells' was such a well written story and all the characters were so well developed! There were about 50 chapters and I actually managed to read them all - without skipping any (this is a great achievement for me ._.). I think it's because your chapters were short and sweet, and to the point, which is why I loved this story ^^.

That being said, I'm sad to see that I finished it so quickly. TT I was reading all the way to the end, and when I got to the last chapter i was like, WHAT? because I didn't even notice I was reading it so fast! I can't tell you if I'm sad about the ending or not, but I want mooore! Which is great because you have a sequel (yay!) and I already subscribed (: I'm torn between whether or not I want Aden and Cassidy together TT I don't know what you have in mind for the sequel but I'll be anticipating it anyways :D.

Oh and side-note: I really loved Matt and Sim's characters, too. :D I sort of wished that Matt and Cassidy would end up together, their friendship was cute. (:

I can't believe it's finally the end!!! This was amazing!!! Off to read Palm Trees!!!
Yours in writing;-),
Errbear

I love this story so..

I'm already subbed to the next on xD

OH MAHH JEEVAS I THINK I JUST ASDKASL:DJAS!!! Fucking beautiful. Just, fucking beautiful. I don't even... I can't even... OH MAHH JEEVAS, JUST FUCKING BEAUTIFUL =') You see how I can't even think of other words to describe this FUCKING BEAUTIFUL story? That's how stunned I am. And I'm even being such a potty mouth.

At first I didn't really know how I feel with the ending, surely, I know this was going to happen (but I kinda hope that by some miracle Aden would forgive her and they'd keep in touch or she'd fall for Matt haha).
But this story ended so perfectly I felt relief, content. Truly a great story everyone should read. I adore your way of writing this story, kinda different I suppose.
So now I'm gonna go read the summary of the sequel, I'm excited :)

I definitely want a sequel, that's for sure. There's still time for them to randomly meet at an ice cream shop..... :) This was a really great closure, though, if you do decide to stop here (which would be upsetting). This whole story was extremely well written, and it was incredibly easy to connect with the characters. So yeah, pleeeeeeeeeeease follow through with more!

I think I might just die if I don't find out what happens next. So...please? Please? pleaaaase? I just sat here......skipped two of my classes (without realizing it might I add and yes I know I am in fact the worst college student ever) and read this entire thing. I need to know what happens. They can't just end like that D:

This story was absolutely, amazingly, ridiculously, beautiful<3. The originality was outrageous and I enjoyed the story line. This story was just perfect. I'm serious. Honestly, my favorite story on here. I looooved this and you're a phenomenal writer and I can NOT wait for the sequel. Extremely glad that you're making another one(: The ending was well done. No harsh cliffhanger, it was good. All questions answered. I loved this story, it was amazing<3

Sdjxjckahajjdowjwjwj. THAT ENDING.D:

This story was amzing! I'm so glad I read it!
I really hope u do make a sequel! That little summary u have
Has already gotten me thinking of what's gonna happen!

This story was so beautiful :')
Really am looking forward to the sequel...the ending was bitter sweet..
All in all, wonderful story though..so glad i found it <3

Oh how I wish things could have ended differently but this story was amazing nonetheless..
I can't believe this story is actually over :\

I love this story and I think it is very realistic but so wonderful.
I guess I would read the sequel if you felt like you wanted to do it, but if you are going to do it you have to put just as much thought into it as this story or it just won't be the same.

Please do a sequel! Your story is so beautifully amazing:) <3

you must finish this *intense stare*

Nooooooo! I don't want this to end ! -_- and ohh there fight was intense. Damn:/

by it I meant the chapter ^^

wow this story is so incredibly amazing and i love how it ended, please you should seriously try to get this published!

excuse me what is this

you are a terrible person are you trying to kill me god you're lucky i love you Dana

update soon ?

NOOOOOO. THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO FALL IN LOVE AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
So. Since that didn't just happen. I'm hoping that some odd years later, they'll run into each other at some nice little ice cream shop, and forget all the poopy stuff that just happened, and run away together to a beach.

Amazing!!! Can't wait!