This story was just so fucking amazing! I read it all in one go, yelling at the characters out loud when they upset me, lucky no-one was home :P And I really shouldn't have read the alternative ending, I'm still sobbing... But like I said, amazing!
To put it quite simply I loved it! Simply amazing. I love love loved the first ending, then I looked down and saw there was an alternate ending and I have a reading addiction, literally, So I was like 'do you really want to read that even though you are content with it now.' And I found out 1) That talking to yourself doesnt work and 2) That I wish It did so I wouldn't of read the alternate ending. Dont get me wrong I love it but I just really wanted Mikey alive and now I cant imagine him that way. Really Awesome work! I love it. I know I will read your other stories. Hopefully one with a good bob =D
Hey Gosh, I knew that before I even read the last couple of chapters that I would end up crying, and I am. It was really well writen and had a lot of emotion in it.
i know that this story is over and all but i just wanted to say that i am in love with it. its amazing, and even though you didnt seem to like it i really liked the bonus ending thinger better than the original one or however that worked out but i have to be honest and say that my eyes were definetly watering when frank was getting the news of mikeys death... but anway amazing story and your an amazing author... just yeah you know all that jazz
^^ I like giving people choices. Really? I don't think I've read one on mibba that didn't have a happy ending. But I don't really read much here...actually, I take that back, I read plenty, but I never finish them.
Wow. I love this story, both endings. I like how you break from the whole death thing at the end of the bonus ending; it gives the reader an amazing sense of hope. Of course, your happy ending is also great. It's funny how rare "happily ever after" happens on Mibba.