This is getting really good. I've never read a femmeslash where for once a girl is even trying to decide if she wants to go out with a guy or girl. Poor Hayley.
Great update! They're really cute together : ] Who's at the door though?? I don't really think there's any way to make it better. Check your spelling really carefully? (Not that I saw any spelling errors, though:))
-gives you skittles-