My Hayley - Comments

more! soon! please?

Cliffhanger?! WHAT?! MORE!!!!

-gives you skittles-

awww too cute
hmm who can be at the door?

Wow. This Is Like... Amazing!
Hayley Williams Is Past Being The Sex.. She Is The Orgasm! :D
More Soon? Please? (:
<3

Awwww! :)

Aww it's very sweet. And it's written well, too. I wanna know what'll happen to them next.

Update soon, please <33

Huzzah! SHE FIXED IT!!

MORE!!

-gives you vegan skittles-

Spaztastic:

Lines that I liked:
I admit, he was cute – for a guy, that is.
^ That was a refresher from a lot of stories I've seen that always say another person beside the one they like are ugly. Also, those stories that have lesbian characters that say all guys are ugly. I'm sure lesbians - like you did - will admit guys can be cute. I'm rambling...I just liked that line.

Some guys can be cute, but I still wouldn't personally say they were cute enough to go out with etc.
I don't really see very many cute guys though, it's a rarity around where I live xD

Sweet update =]
The way you described how fragile Hayley seemed made her seem like a porcelain doll just waiting to be cracked.

~Ruthus
xoxox

awww they're so cute
finally together yay!
more soon please

I like this story. Much, much better than any slash of any kind I've read. Maybe because it's femmeslash for one, and it started off differently.

Lines that I liked:
I admit, he was cute – for a guy, that is.
^ That was a refresher from a lot of stories I've seen that always say another person beside the one they like are ugly. Also, those stories that have lesbian characters that say all guys are ugly. I'm sure lesbians - like you did - will admit guys can be cute. I'm rambling...I just liked that line.

I’m straight, I always have been, and I always will be. I’m not gay, I like boys!
^ That's another point for you! I don't think I've ever seen a story have a character do that type of reasoning.

I like this story a lot, though I have to stop reading at the third chapter because I have other stories to read at the moment.
But I'll be coming back to this in a short bit.

p.s. I'm subscribing.

I actually really like this.
I think a little part of me died when she kissed Zach.
Possibly because I know how much it would kill me if that happened to me.

It's quite well written, more soon, yes?

ahhh nooo why did she have to kiss him
she better fix this lol
can't wait til the next one...

FIX IT HAYLEY!!! FIX IT!!!!!

-gives you vegan skittles-

oh my gosh
D:
continue nowww
-is a new reader :]-

O.o
Noo!
Jeeze...
She has to fix it

~Ruthus
xoxox

=O

I like how she asked if she could kiss her xD
It was so sweet.

~ruthus
xoxox

That was so cute!!!! Write more!

-gives you vegan skittles-

so today, i was tottaly thinking "why isn't hayley williams in any fanfictions" and then you pop along!

love it!

^.^
It's so sweet

~ruthus
xoxox