Of a Boy Named Jack - Comments

I just thought of this story randomly and wish you would have continued it ):

This is so good! Please please please write more! (:

Thank you thank you thank you! :D

@ jakkay23
I'll try to asap :)

you should update(:

I liked this. Cute story. Nice choice of words.

I like the idea and all that c:
The layout and the summary could use some more work though.

apperently its a lot like spiderwick, but I have yet to read that series...

but I'm glad you like it, I'll try to update soon... at the moment I'm a little stuck

So I really really like this! Is this based off of a book? Because I think a read a series like this a couples years ago, but I cang remember.

The whole idea there being another world excites me! Please update soon! I'm subscribing :)

Ohhhhh I'm confused in a good way :) I like this! And jack! He intrigues me. What is with him? How does he know about that stuff?

WHAT IS WITH THIS ELVISH STUFF???

I can't finish reading now but I'm bookmarking this so I can read it later.

The summary is so awesome. Seriously right away I knew I'd love this. This is my kind of story!!! XD It's really creative! Great job on that.

And chapter one was great too. I like Alice, you make her real. She has quirks and faults and all that stuff, like a real person. And you show all of it in just the first chapter! That's good.

So, is there more to this Jack guy that meets the eye?! I think there might be!! heh. This is really good, you should update soon ^^

I like this, It is really good. I love how unique the concept is and the way you write is really unique and good to. I love the way it caught my attention and how simple the way you started each new paragraph was. I advise you to make this finished, It is truly a good sotry.

To start off, the layout is nice and autumn-y colored, which I looove. The colors all blend very well, and the banner image is so cool with the spider web and all :D I love that. And while I'm not a huge fan of long summaries, it actually gave me a good idea on the story itself without giving too much away. I'm really excited to read more, because I love magical creatures :)

So I only just got done the first chapter, but I must say this looks SO good. I love how odd Alice is, like grabbed Jack's wrist, and the doodling on the desks is just so relatable. Her trouble-maker attitute is quite cute too, as is Jack's with how he was smiling and all xD They both seem like interesting characters alike, and I cannot wait to read more about them.

Definitely going to read the rest of what you have up later, so I'm subscribing <33

By the way, I giggled when you said that original, this chapter 1 was seven chapters xD Good luck with the revision process!!

I liked the update, and I'm going to subscribe, if I haven't already :)

I think I'll be revising this chapter before I post the next one, and I'll tell you when I have! And I would love a proof reader, that would help out bunches ^^;

Thank you :3

Is Marty always that way? Anyway, I liked this chapter. You told us more about Alice's sight and her background with it. I like that she didn't just keep it a secret from the beginning- that she told people, and they thought she was insane. I like that she had a reason not to tell anybody, because she experienced what happened when she did. I would've like it a bit more in depth, though. Like maybe a bit of dialogue from her father or the shrink?

I also caught a few errors in this chapter as well. If you need help proofreading, feel free to message me!

I'll be updating soon you too fast of a reader you ;)

I like the update. It's nice and informative. <3 Makes me wonder who this... Inggled is? Hm. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.

This story is DA BOMB DIGGITY :D

I really like this!

I like Alice, she just seems overall someone I'd get along with :) I don't really know what to say... it was just really good and it draws you in because you want to know more about this world and why Alice can see it and how she found it!

Keep it up! ^^