Shotgun K - Comments

Welcome back to the world of the living! We have cake. And peanut butter. Dude that was intense i would have pissed myself from being so scared

Wow, this story is well written and I enjoyed reading it. :) The way your story line is unique and unique is good! Thank you very much on a great read!

FINALLY CATCHING UP. ERGHHHH IM SO STUPID BECAUSE I READ THIS OFF MY IPHONE AND I OPENED UP THE READER TAB AND WHAT I DIDN'T KNOW WAS THAT AT THE END OF EVERY PAGE WAS THE END OF EVERY CHAPTER SO I READ LIKE 92717177 PAGES AND IM LIKE "SHIT MANBEAR WRITES LONG ASS CHAPTERS"

BUT WHO CARES BECAUSE I LOVE THIS AND THIS IS A SHITTY COMMENT BUT I HAVE LEFT MY MARK

OOOOoooOO This is exciting!!!!!! Seriously though, I almost had a heart attack with he whole lights thing...please write again soon, it was like Christmas on a monday!

Really well-written! I love the character of Jae-Sung. I've never actually read a story like this where the bodyguard is a female and the famous star is a male, I like it! Keep writing because you seriously are really good at it. I can't wait for the next chapter !

Really well-written! I love the character of Jae-Sung. I've never actually read a story like this where the bodyguard is a female and the famous star is a male, I like it! Keep writing because you seriously are really good at it. I can't wait for the next chapter !

You know what is interesting? I actually started to read Mission J. Mibba is a very small writing world lol because I've been following that story and started to read this awhile ago. The detailing is amazing... especially at 14. Perfect structure and the action of it. I've actually really enjoyed your writing, it also reminds me of something someone in their 20's would write which is why when your profile said 14 I was completely blown away. I really like this story because of the action and how it shows the life of a celebrity and what they go through being famous, plus the power struggle. It's amazing. I don't see one thing I can criticize because it's flawless. Same with Mission J. I can't wait to see where this goes because it really pulls in the readers. I recommended this story, and mission J. Keep up the wonderful writing I'll be checking back for more updates for sure!

I like the way you first introduce the story, how your summary flows and actually makes me curious on what going to happen, how it's going to happen and wonder about Jae-Sing Seo. It took me a while to even get to the fifth chapter but I’m glad I struck it through and I’m pleasantly surprised on how much I like and enjoy the story. You have your own way of writing and it’s absolutely magnificent. Your chapters are lengthy and you get into details very well. I don’t have a problem reading anything and you grammar, spelling and punctuation is spot on. I’d like to see you update more often aha, I’m not even up to the fifteenth chapter but I’d still like to know that this story won’t have a sudden stop to it. I’m never really the person who likes any sort of Asian stories with Asian characters but this one is pretty well done and I like how you played it all out. I really do like it and hopefully by the time I’m done there will be more chapters to read! Don’t stop writing and keep going with the flow of this, by the way the cliff hangers kill me.

First chapter done

Girl, what is this madness? Jaesung...oomph. I'd be one of those freaks screaming Jaesung in that damn crowd. I'd flutter over all them fangirls on my Aladdin carpet and steal him away ;D I loved the intro. Hehe. I LOVE IT ALRIGHT.

I've been eyeballing this for a while now. Since I'm off on Spring Break this shall be my goal to read. Hehe. Get ready for spammed commnets, my beautiful Manbear!

Obviously, he is the reason they can't have a civil conversation. I know that he has shit going on in his life, but he needs to look at things from K's perspective and shut the hell up. ka shinsfjsdkfnjsdlfksjalk

Why does he keep being stupid and not understanding??

It's so sweet that he's worried about her :33

Interesting chapter. The idol worship is immensely terrifying. The way the girls seem to have nothing else in their lives but that one man. And a man too, that seems to care too much for himself and not know any of them. It's depressing. There's a hollowness to the whole atmosphere and I'm wondering, what will fill it?

Great writing, your descriptin is nice, I think you should have more of a plot as well, like what else this character does with his life, but it is probably coming.

It's strange how his actions are so forced. He "allowed a smile," that's so strange. Like a robot, like a computer, like some sort of robot king computer thing. Why is he so technical? That's the question, why is he so hollow?

This is really good, although I don't know the celebrity, I'm actually glad about that, I want to read it because it seems like there might be a story to this calculating character you made up.

@ Manbear-n'-Me!
Your welcome, I figured you would work on that one first.

@ Obsessive Writing
I'm glad you liked my stories! I really do appreciate all the feedback you have been giving me. It also gives me a confidence boost in my writing!

I will update ASAP; I'm currently working on Mission J since I've been behind on that one.
Thanks for reading!

Aww man, both this and Mission J ended on cliffhangers. I can't wait until you make the next chapters of both. I really enjoy reading them. And I'm glad that Jae-Sung found trust in Sun Hi. With all the chaos going on in his life, he really needed a friend. Not meaning to sound harsh, but I think he deserved that 'elbow' too. :P

you have had me hood from the first chapter and now on to this last your writing is superb, and you characters are very clearly depicted each with their own distinct personality, none of whom simply follow stereotypes. The plot is very interesting and I look forward to reading even more

The summary and layout are very nice. For a second I honestly thought it was a real famous guy x)

Interesting view into the singer's perspective. How he was amused and toying with the crowd of fangirls, haha.
A bit of a major ego, though...He smirks quite a bit..maybe different way of saying it like "lips quirk" or something to keep it from being as repetitive?

I like the random fangirl managing to get past security and tackling him. That was funny x)

Character's pretty consistent with wanting more fans and I like that (:
Interesting little tidbit about the ex-girlfriend, too (:

I like what you've got going in the first two chapters. Real good set-up. Hope you enjoy continuing this (:

I've been reading this for a couple of days, now. I currently just finished reading chapter 10. And I must say, this story is really drawing me in. It has everything I like to read, suspense, mystery, thriller. In the box was nothing that I suspected. I thought that it would be a gun or a bomb or something like that. I'm trying to catch up to the last chapter to subscribe to this. xD