Shotgun K - Comments

I think that it is flowing just fine. When I was reading it, nothing stood out to me as being awkward. I think that you did a good job in incorporating Sun Hi's personality into their conversation the way it would be were this a real situation. Since it's in first person and he's the main character, it's only natural that his darker feelings would prevail over hers. And I'm kind of nervous to see what is going to go down when she answers the phone.

Awww :) I got mentioned! Thank you! And I'm glad that he can find a confidante in her. It's kind of funny that she already met K though and just doesn't know it :p

Aww :3 confidante! And he totally got a bit of crap there.

I'm so glad that you updated :). And I'm glad that he's realizing (kind of) that he's being a jerk.

I'm so happy that you updated :3 (both stories). And he has some issues. I know that he's freaked and that he's used to people being fake with him, but can't he just accept that she's just trying to do her freaking job?

I like the concept of this story. I haven't really ever read about a famous person who isn't actually real, aha. Your descriptions are very nice, and I like the attitude your main characters has. It comes of very rockstarish and rude, I guess haha.

I only read the first chapter, but I noticed that your paragraphs aren't really separated, and that made it a bit hard to read. Other than that, well done :)

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Haha i think i just got your other story. Once again you write bloody perfect and there is no fault there. Your word choice is strong and darn if you couldn't be published. It brilliant. Keep Writing :)

So I just finished what's put up of this and the other story, and I absolutely love it! I was actually surprised at how well written the two stories are. A lot of the other stories I've read on this website that are supposed to be dramatic and about spies or something like it are usually... I'm not quite sure how to explain it. It's just not as mature or detailed. It was a nice change of reading. I will definitely be waiting for the next update :)

even though I have never heard of the main character I still found the story really interesting and I was filled with suspense when you were leading up to what was inside the cardboard box. That was so freaky. I like how nothing in your story is predictable and everything comes out of left field. I like the characters, they're very interesting. I hope you keep up the awesome job

i felt brought intot he story your an amazing writer keep writign and it will pay off i cant wait to see the day you get a publishing deal and i can say i comment on one of their first stories

i love the layout the storyline its all amazing

I really love the layout of this story and I love your writing style. I like the mixing of the korean and russian :)
even though I have never heard of the main character I still found the story really interesting and I was filled with suspense when you were leading up to what was inside the cardboard box. That was so freaky. I like how nothing in your story is predictable and everything comes out of left field. I like the characters, they're very interesting. I hope you keep up the awesome job :D

This story is so good. Ive only read about 13 chapters so far and im engrossed in it! I love how it tool this long for them to actually meet, while other stories, it's in the first couple of chapters. I like how detailed it is. I haven't found much of errors, so good job! I'm gonna go back to reading this story now.lol :)

I like the story a lot so far, it flows really well! The characters are good, and your descriptions are great! I’ve gotten half way through and it leaves me always wanting to read more. I’ve subscribed and can’t wait to read the rest and what’s to come after. Great job!

the layout is great, the writing is great, the characters are well-developed, i love K. i love this honestly, its unique and interesting and i am glad i came across it in comment swap. good work, keep it up

i really like it. usually, i'm really not a fan of first person perspective, it just rubs me the wrong way, but it works well here. you really get a look into the protagonist's mind, and i like that.

also, not relevant, but the layout is super super nice too.

I forgot this: :)<3

Wahhh I feel so bad with going on and off with commenting:/ whenever I get the chance I read it, cuz it's still one of my fave!
Every character in this is my favorite in different ways. Well I don't have to go into details about Jae. He is just JAE and wahh I'm just in love with him:3 and then there's Mr. Park he is such a father figure but still has his funny scenes with sarcastic comment and enjoyable dialogs. K is still a fucking mystery for me (but that's a good thing!) And finally Sun Hi I love her bubbly and hyperacive personality :D I'm really curious if there will be a love triangle or sg :D hah
And the last chapter wasn't boring at all! I don't know how you do it but even the plain & simple chapters that aren't full of drama/surprising events are so good, it's great to read.
Ok I'm stopping. I hope my long comment makes up for my lack of commenting :/ I just don't always have internet and my blackberry doesn't like sites like mibba:/

I love Korean drama so finding your story on this site made my day (:
I love the descriptions of Jae Sung and K. Though I would like a lot more about her, and from her point of view.

The only thing that I find sortaweird and doesn't fit the story, in my opinion, is Sun Hi. I find it strange that the pair have just met a couple of days ago but she's already hitting him, yelling at him, and such.
Maybe that's just me though.

Great story though, keep up with the updates.

-Maggie. (:

Wow.... poor Jae. Being blackmailed by Sun Hi!
LOL!
This chapter was funny!
Loved it! Good Job!

First of all, your layout is really pretty. And I'm jealous of whoever took that picture.

I never read a story like yours, but so far its amazing. You're very descriptive with everything. Plus I spotted no grammar mistakes, which is awesome.

Overall, this is an amazing story. You're a great writer, so keep it up!