This Temptation - Comments

That was a very hot update. Can't wait for the next one

I think only you could write about two people dry-humping and make it that hot. So, congrats. You basically win the internet with your flawless writing. :)

Ive read all of your stories and this is hands down my favorite yet!!! seriously its fricken hottt!

omg i love this story. so hotttttt. and i love them together.

ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg this chapter!
UNF
love it!

I totally agree about Seguin. I always say that he seems like a frat boy. He's good looking but that just isn't attractive to me at all. I have a question though. Do you think real Jeff Skinner is a virgin? I don't. I don't think he's super experienced either but I think he's got it in. Lol. Awkwardness just radiates off the story and I love it. :)

BUFFALO?! OMG! That just makes it ten times easier to pretend that I'm this girl! I can't believe you chose Buffalo! May I ask why? And extend an offer to help you with any research you may need about the city, seeing as it's my city! Is it yours too? Is that why? I'm so happy about this! I can't even...

Just because he and his wild pack of supermodel brothers had probably been getting blowjobs from cowgirls on their sod farm since they were fifteen....

Oh my word. Wild pack of supermodels, eh? Lol. :)

“I have milk and apple juice. We could watch TV or something.”

REALLY?! Did he really just fucking say that? This boy has no game! Milk and apple juice? What is wrong with you? Oh my.

omg kissing her ear = so hot. tori is one lucky girl. and i loved how sneaky he was with that power nap! i can't wait to read more!!!!

Love this. Jeff is so sweet

More, please! I love it.

Jeff is adorable in this <3

ahhh this is gonna be so good!!

(: AHHHHH THEYRE SO CUTE

UPDATE ASAP ! omg you can't leave it hanging like that ):

I'm slowly (I've actually been reading everyday but there is a lot of material to catch up on) making my way through all your stories and one shots. And I decided to see what your working on right now. I just about died when I saw that it was a Jeff Skinner story. THANK YOU! :)

Waahhh, I'm obsessed! Starbucks love, can't get over it, hahaha. Can't wait for more!

Ahh, they kissed! Yayay!

I'm loving this story more and more with each update!

Aw, still so cute... milk and apple juice... he does seem like a virgin, doesn't he? Oh man. Doesn't matter to me! My brother used to play hockey against him - this story makes me wish I'd paid more attention at the rink...