I can't believe I just found this and now it's over! That is just my luck! Loved it though! Jack was my favorite Kings player and I'm still having a hard time knowing that he isn't with the team anymore. I was on vacation when the trade happened. It made me so sad. But I loved the story! Great work!!!
I'm so sorry I haven't commented in a while. So sorry! I'v ebeen trying to get my shit together to go back to school. Plus I became an auntie for the third time last week. So let's just say that life has been a little hectic and stressful as of late.
You had me so freaked out that he wasn't going to make it on time. Like I said, I just became an aunt again to my first neice, I would've have freaked out if I missed being at the hospital the day she was born. I still kick myself for not being there when my nephew was born. :/
I loved this story so much. I can't believe there is only an epilogue left. :( This makes me sad. You have made me fallen in like with Jack Johnson through this story.
As always, goo things have to come to an end. Sometimes far too soon. I can't wait for all your other projects to start up. :)
This was amazing! You did an amazing job! And JJ is so damn cute! One can only hope that giving birth goes as quick as it did for her! But I'm so glad the baby is healthy and they are all safe together and a family. The declaration of love scares me though. Mostly because I'm unsure of her feelings and Jack had that feeling. Anyway, can't wait for the epilogue! I hope it was a happy ending. I'm scared.
I knew he'd convince her! I knew that she would agree! She seems to be one of those hopeless romantic types, despite her realism and responsible personality. I just hope that it all works out. And boy is Jack excited for this kid. A little more than I had expected even. It's almost like he secretly wanted kids already. Or maybe subconsciously? Who knows. Well you probably know. Lol. Anyway, I love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens once she gets to L.A. Did you decide to include the trade? Well, I'm sure I'll find out! Great job! :)
That does clear it up, thank you! I'm just so used to one baby being "it" and more than one being "they". I can't wait to see what happens once she gets out to LA!
You keep saying 'they' when talk about the baby (babies?). So is there more than one, or is that a mistake? Anyway, I'm glad you've figured out where you want to go with this. I can't wait to find out! :)
I agree with the person above. You said she would hate to move to raise a kid in LA, so if you decide you want her to move to America he should probably be traded. But that's just my opinion. I'm sure whatever you decide will be fabulous :) I can't wait for the next update!
I think incorporating the trade would be a good idea. If I'm not mistaken, didn't she say that she would hate to raise her kid in L.A.. Or did I just make that up? Lol. This is me assuming that she'd be making the move to America, which is completely unfair to assume. Well, whatever happens, hopefully it will all work out for the babies sake. Can't wait for the next update!
Aww you should update more often. I don't read many Jack Johnson fics but I really like this one. Well update soon and can't wait to see what you do with the move.
Loved it! I hope she does decide to move to LA. I know she loves her home in Sweden and what not but I just have a feeling that isn't exactly how she wants to raise her child, one parent on one side of the world and the other on the other side. It's just not fair to the baby. Plus she pretty much just admired that she thought about living in LA before she got pregnant.
To answer your question, I would love to see the trade worked into this story somehow. Can't wait for the next update! :)