You just had to end that chapter there, didn't you? Especially when I'm just really starting to get into this story? Please update again, really soon. :)
Alright, I'll admit it. I'm sort of in like this story and you have me wanting to learn more about the Kings & Jack. I knew it wasn't going to take long, with your writting expertise. :)
I can't wait to find out how she finds Jack & his reaction.
Your stories are always so well written and captivating. Although I admit i dont know much about the Kings, this story still looks like it will be interesting. Cant wait for the next update!
This story is going to be different for me to get used to reading. I love your writting, but I'm not sure how I feel on a Jack Johnson story, yet. I like where it's going so far. But since I'm not a fan of the Kings and don't really know much about them or Jack, it's going to take some time for me, until I fall completely in love with this story. Unlike all your other stories, that I've fallen in love with instantly. Maybe it's because I actaully like those players/teams or know more about them than I do for Jack. Don't get me wrong, I'm excited to learn more about him and see where you take this story. I'm sure it will be just as good as your others, but give me some time to get used to it.
With that said I'm so happy your back and writting. I've honestly missed your stories. :)
Now u got me wondering where she is from, lol. I like it so far. Cannot believe she asked him to go back to her room, lol. :) Sexy ass Jack. Cannot wait to see where this goes. Awesome job.