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  • writhing

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    WHY IS THIS STORY SO PERFECT?
    I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

    But seriously, Violet and Garrett are so cute together and it makes me want a relationship like that (but mostly I want Garrett). Damn it, John! Must he be such a hard ass? She's only trying to help. But I'm also pretty excited to see where Violet and John's relationship heads. Idk man, I'm also conflicted. SO MANY CUTE BOYS.

    PIONEER IS PERFECT. I CAN'T STOP LISTENING TO IT EITHER.
    JAKJFHJRGHGH BUT IT'S MORE AMAZING LIVE. I saw the Maine last night and it was fantastic.
    THE BOYS WERE SO NICE AND I HUGGED ALL OF THEM AJSKESJHFRGH

    AND I'M GETTING OFF TOPIC.

    So anyway, I hope you update again soon because this is wonderful.
    And excuse my constant usage of Caps Lock. I just get really excited about these boys. :D
    December 23rd, 2011 at 06:03am
  • hollow vessels

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    I seriously love this story.
    John has got to pull it together. Or rather Vi has to pull John together.
    And it's got to happen quickly.
    But Garrett. Oh Garrett is such a cutie. I'm conflicted! >.<
    Update soon!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • fagtricia

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    I'm so stoked for this, Garrett and Violet's cute but a part of me wants her to be with John!! Hahahah
    December 22nd, 2011 at 03:30pm
  • Swallowedbythesea;

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    I love where this story is heading, the plot line is so unique!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:02am
  • ftskourtney

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    Love this story. Garrett is sooo adorable. Please update soon.
    December 22nd, 2011 at 06:59am
  • erika_xtc

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    Now that I'm out of high school I'm wishing I could go back, but yeah I get where you're coming from. When I was in high school I couldn't wait to get out!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 05:21am
  • let's migrate

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    Awh what a cute chapter. :3 Garrett and her are so perfect, but I can just feel something bad will happen soon :/
    December 22nd, 2011 at 03:19am
  • bouffe delirante.

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    oh. shit.
    Why are you so awesome?

    I adore this, even though its frightening for me to read that he doesn't care about the maine. Ahaha. What a strange thought.

    At the risk of sounding lame: I'm excited to read the entirety of this story. (:
    December 22nd, 2011 at 01:31am
  • BUSTANUT

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    I really love Violet and Garrett together. They are so cute together and it worries me. I have this feeling that shit is going to go down and that perfect little couple is going to be broken /:
    December 21st, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • spidey babe parker

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    violet and Garrett are so cute. please update soon.
    December 21st, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • deactivatedError

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    Awwww her and Garrett seem so cute together!!!!! I can't wait for more :)
    December 21st, 2011 at 10:35pm
  • eight letters late.

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    JOHN LOVES IT.
    I like Violet.
    lol at them watching How I Met Your Mother.
    You would.
    u p d a t e !
    December 16th, 2011 at 07:10am
  • let's migrate

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    Ooooh it's actually starting to work!!! :3 I love this so much! I can't wait to see John go back to his old self, even though I know it will be a while.
    December 13th, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • spidey babe parker

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    I love the this story so much (: please update soon.
    December 13th, 2011 at 06:05pm
  • Run.Away

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    Love the chapter :) Pioneer is amazing I've had it on repeat since I got it on the seventh :)
    December 13th, 2011 at 11:14am
  • lovelyhope

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    I was the same way when I first listened to the cd. I was unsure but now I love it. Their new sound is amazing and I think that's what the really needed. I love Take Me Dancing. Also, when I heard that first line in the hidden track I immediately thought of this story lol.

    So John's finally letting her in...a tiny, tiny bit. I'm guessing this will be a long road.
    December 12th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I'm even more in love. lol I'm not afraid to say that this
    is going to be one of my favorite stories.
    <3
    December 12th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • Swallowedbythesea;

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    This story is so unique and adorable! Can't wait for more!
    December 12th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • State Of Grace

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    I completely agree with you on the album. When I first listened to the songs I hadn't heard before I didn't like it all, but now I'm constantly listening to it, and I can't even listen to black and white that much anymore just because I am in love with their new type of sound

    That took really long too say and I apologize lmao, anyways I'm glad John is going to allow her to keep cleaning, and I am REALLY curious too see what is in the room

    Update soon!
    December 12th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • deactivatedError

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    OMG I was listening to their new album as I read this! Amazing job :D
    December 12th, 2011 at 01:45am