Dance with a Devil - Comments

GIVE ME MORE!

This is a recipe for disaster, and yet I'm totally rooting for it.
I love how John's wall goes down for like a second whenever Vi says something
before hoisting it back up and fighting to stay stern.
I love it. I can't wait to see how crazy this gets. :)

This is definitely one of my favorites!

So weird to see my name in this! But I love my character, she's very loud hahahaha.
But I can't wait to see where this all plays out. I know it's going to get messy, I already feel bad for Garypoooo (; hahaha

First of all let me start out by saying how much I just LOVE your story I love the plot, characters, and the layout :D I sooooo can't wait to see where this goes :)

First of all I am so jelly that you get to go to the Wizarding World of Harry Potter. Last time I was in Florida they were just beginning to build it so it wasn't open :(

On to the story....Cecilia is hilarious. Vi is so sweet for helping the guys out. I have a feeling things are going to get crazy dramatic though.

Oh my gosh. Just imagining John say that he doesn't care about the Maine breaks my heart. Violet needs to fix him because this baaaad!
Love this story soooo much!

The dialogue in this chapter was absolutely hilarious.
All the banter between the boys and then her convo with Cec was perfect!
And so it begins! Waiting on tenterhooks for John's reaction to her cleaning visit. :)!

I am just loving this story!

Also Harry Potter World is the BEST world ever known to mankind! You are going to love it.

Anyways update soon!

Ahhhhh really can't wait. THE SLAVING BEGINS!

I love this! Garrett is so cute and I just want hug him, but I really like him and Violet together because they're adorable. I also feel kind of bad for John because he's going through a rough time, though I do wish that we could find out what it is that's making him this way. But I'll just wait patiently. I hope he let's Violet help him. :D

P.S. THE WIZARDING WORLD OF HARRY POTTER IS THE MOST AMAZING THAT I'VE EVER SEEN AND I REALLY WANT TO LIVE THERE (I read the author's note and I got really excited so I had to say that). You'll have so much fun! :)

This is so good. I'm glad she agreed to help him. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

I like where this story is going and can't wait for the next chapter!

I hope they find him a girl that can get through to him. I really don't want Garrett's girlfriend cheating on him *shakes head*

I love that she climbed through his window. Just when I thought he was going to cave and let her help, he kicked her out. He really is a beast! Violet and Garrett are cute. :3

I like this so far! I'm excited for whats to come :)

I love this story already!! i can't wait for the next chapter!

I really love this.

Violet and Garrett are adorable together but i'm worried that she will start to get attached to John. Girls have this attraction to guys that are broken, hoping to fix them. And John is obviously fucked up. I wondered what went down on his vacation that got him so fucking crazy.

I love this and I love you.
can't wait to read more.

Poor John :( I really hope Violet can help him. I'm very excited to if/how she gets through to him. I can just picture the struggle and I can't wait for more insight on what happened in Oregon! :)

Oh woe, John. >.< Why are you acting like this? I'm absolutely intrigued. What happened to him? And I really love Vi already. She's a sweetheart. John better let her help him. Update soon!