Looks Can Be Deceiving - Comments

OH MY GOODNESS. PLEASE JUST LET THEM FUCK. I DON'T EVEN CARE WHAT HAPPENS AFTER, BUT IF THEY BANG IT'LL BE THE BEST SEX EVAR

Wooooow fantastic chapter! I love how things are heating up btwn them! Im super excited to see the next chapter!

Update pleaseeee! >.<

amazing!

LOVING YOUR STORY...congratz and keep up the great work :D

Hello there :)
I have read this whole story so far, and just so you know...
You have become one of my favorite mibba writers ever.
And I can't, can't, CAN'T wait for an update.

<3

This story is freakin epic and i love it but will she just kiss him all ready..... Lol update on the double cause its greatly needed!!!! Lol :)

So Matt got to see a side of Britt that was hiding after that asshole of an ex broke her.
He knows that she is very alive, very affectionate and hyper whenever she is drunk or having a lot of fun.
Man Tyler really has the balls to tell Britt about Matt and try to get her to stay away from him since she doesn't know much about him.
But she got the end of the laugh when she said the same thing about him when lied to her about the affair he had with his pregnant fiance.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Matt got to see a side of Britt that was hiding after that asshole of an ex broke her.
He knows that she is very alive, very affectionate and hyper whenever she is drunk or having a lot of fun.
Man Tyler really has the balls to tell Britt about Matt and try to get her to stay away from him since she doesn't know much about him.
But she got the end of the laugh when she said the same thing about him when lied to her about the affair he had with his pregnant fiance.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Number one...I hate Tyler. If you don't already know, though I do want to know why he knows who/what Matt is, and WE don't! Number two...I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Such a fun, carefree chapter. I'm so glad Britt was finally able to let loose and have a good time. Seems like things with her and Matt are heating up ;P LOVE IT! More soon please <3

I will beat the hell out of this Tyler fellow. I do not like him one bit. But I am glad that everything was gotten off her chest and Matt knows. Things need to get fixed now! I loved the chapter! But don't think I haven't given up on my underground porn idea! LOL

Oh my God, poor Britt! I can't believe that guy was such an asshole to her. He's the reason she's so broken, and the way she is. UGH! I wanna rip his face off! But the perfection of this chapter...I can't even tell you. You know how much I've loved every chapter but so far, this is my favorite one. Especially because of Matt and his adorableness. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! <3

I LOVED IT!! :)
Matt is so cute and adorable and teddy-bear like sometimes that I just want to pinch his cheeks and go 'awwwwww'. Tee hee.

I can't wait for more :) x

So before she became so emotionally detached, she was the total opposite!
Her and Tyler were so happy together but then Tyler changed and become someone so different.
He began to cheat on her with various of women but then that changed when he stuck to one mistress and in the end, he kept around, slapped a ring her and got her pregnant.
I wonder why he looked so angry when he saw Britt with Matt and so close together.
But at least Matt knows why Britt would become so down on some days and just be on total lockdown.
I bet the talk between them has lift the weight that has been on her shoulders because she is glad that she with the guys and with Matt the most.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oooh, Matt needs to keep calm, lol

You should definitely go into more depth of Brittney's past relationship that still has major affect on her and makes her feel so down on herself.
And also a bit of Matt's ex-fiance.
Well it seems that the guys gathered there have taken an interest in Brittney and how jealous some of the women there are jealous of her.
I enjoyed his chapter very much!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my!! You can't leave it there!! You can't tell me its going to get rougher and then end it!! I mean really!! :)
I loved the chapter!! I admit, I was expecting some form of closeness between the two of them!! That didn't include hissing angrily in faces!! Lol. Can't wait for more ducky x

This story is going great! It keeps me on my toes with all the mysterious-ness with the guys business and such. I like that you dont reveal everything about everyone all at once, you piece it together as you go along. And I love their chemistry. Can't wait for the next update after that cliffhanger! :)

woah woah woah,
this story is fucking great man!
i am HOOKED!

i wonder whats gonna happen next...
cant wait for the next update!