Looks Can Be Deceiving - Comments

Yup he's in the porn business.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! And I just have to say holy hello that mansion. Can I live there forever. I would love to be surrounded by the water. But dammit they better make me tastier food. I need spice and delicious! Bro, if those bitches were eying up my man I would jump their asses. Nuh uh I would not be having it. I can;t wait to read what happens next!

Absolutely. Freaking. LOVE this update. I can't even imagine what it would be like to be invited to a dinner like that! I wouldn't be able to function, I'd just be staring the whole time hahaha. It would be amazing though, especially being there with a guy like Brian or Matt ;P I seriously would have lost a marble or two with all those skankbags eyeing him like that though. At least she somewhat marked her territory lol. But DAMN YOU for the cliffhanger! I need to know what's going to happen next! MORE SOON PLEASE! <3

I LOVED THIS UPDATE!!!
I'm not going to lie!! I'm still shaking somewhat as I wait for you to reveal what the crap they do!! I genuinely can't wait to find out!!! So many thoughts are whirling around my head and I just want to know which ones are right!! :D
Like I said...LOVED IT!! And I can't wait for more :) especially to see if there's some Disney-esque moment at this dinner where Britt looks at Matt and goes "Oh my!! I love him!!" Tee hee. x

I love this update!
I would love to read about more of Britt's past and how that asshole screwed her over.
Since Britt just completely breaks down on some days and her self worth just goes down the toilet.
And the guys are definitely are right about Matt just being himself and being there for Britt, she'll eventually start to fall in love with him.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Matts such a sweetheart
him and britt need to get together already
i loved both updates
cant wait for more!

Awww I just want them to get together! I like how you've written this to where they don't just automatically fall in love though

LOL! I WAS THINKING THE SAME THING AS LYNDSEY... Why is she so vocal and a bit obnoxious. I don't even care, I like reading about her like this. It makes me giggle!
OH MATT! He's too perfect! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Why am I so annoying in this? I am seriously beginning to wonder about what you think of me, Miss Britt XD But I love this update! Matt's such a sweetheart. The dresses sound beautiful. And I can't wait to see what's gonna happen at the dinner! <333

This story is sooo good! I'm so curious what will happens next and if Matt will be mad at her for being in his room or if he will tell her what he's really doing (whatever it is! And I'm really curious now after she had found the room)
I hope for a upload soon, as this story is really good and I can't wait for more :)

What the freak are they into?
I'm even more curious now.

...A secret room of dildos?! WHAT IS GOING ON?! I had been thinking they were part of the mafia or some crap, but holy shit, maybe they're in the porn business?! And WHAT is with the money Matt was talking about?! This is driving me crazy, woman! CRAZY! But I do love this update. Mhm. Mhm. Mhm. PLEASE MORE SOON! <333

Man I just busted out laughing when she stumbled upon Matt's secret room that had dildo! XD
I bet she is very tense around Matt especially how she rambled on when he got back about the food she made for the girls.
I know now that Matt and including the other guys are apart of something bigger than they let on to Brittney because she found a secret of Matt's.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, so Matt must be very kinky

okay bitch, either they run a secret porn industry or some shit is going down like the mafia. Or they're creepy ass demons who like vibrators.
LOL I did laugh at the vibrator part though! But I am not amused with your shit right now. Keeping what these boys do a secret. And that middle part where Matt is talking about money. WHAT IS GOING ON GIRL?!
I loved the chapter though! Perfect! It has me asking even more questions. UPDATE SOON YOU HO! I don't care if you have college applications. I'm in college and I demand another update! RESPECT YOUR ELDER!
<3

I really love this story!:) it was cool to hear what she thinks about all the guys in this chapter

AWWW ZACKY AND I HAVE MATCHING PIERCINGS!
I totally forgot my septum was pierced for a moment haha
I absolutely loved the update! Matt is so perfect! And Johnny cracks me up.
I can't wait for more :)

I am loving your story!
The details just amaze me so much.
But I just wanted to kick her ex-boyfriend's ass!
He is a scumbag for ever cheating on Brittney and I am glad that she left his ass though she could have done it sooner since she knew what he was doing.
And the chapter where both Brittney and Lyndsey were attacked and Brittney saved the day though she had to kill about two men.
I have a feeling that the guys are something else because they have expensive stuff like Brittney whenever her and Lyndsey mention their names people either become frighten or angry.
I definitely can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

matt is such a cutie. worrying about Britt like that
they need to get together already
cant wait for more!

I think...I would have punched that therapist in the face. But that's just me and my dislike for being psychoanalyzed and talking about stuff. BUT RAY'S HERE NOW, WOO! I was excited lol. I love this chapter! The guys are perfect, every one of them. I love the little descriptions of each of the guys but seriously, I want to know WHO THEY ARE! Like really. And Matt and Britt just need to bump uglies already and admit they got mad love for each other. That's just the bottom line.

LOVE THE UPDATE! <333

dont get the chocolate fever comment... i am a little lost. glad to see you were able to update and congrats on updating to a mac!