24 Hours - Comments

Ha-ha, Callie is so me. Like the only thing that’s stopping her from being attractive to guys is lack of confidence. Anyway, I really liked this, and I think it’s cool that you have so many different characters, and you’re writing this by yourself. I think it would get difficult to have all those personalities in my head, and try to write them and make them not get all jumbled together. I didn’t see any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is always good!

This reminds me of a film that I can't remember the name of. I can really see this made into a film, a bit like Love Actually. All the characters have their own identities without getting muddled up with each other. Great job

I love this story so much!:) the lovie-dovie kind of theme you have going on matches the layout very well, I personally think. The banner matched also:) this idea is very original and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. Great job, I hope this story goes far, you deserve it with your wonderful description and character development and whatnot
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O....M.....G.....LOVE!!!!!! I totally and utterly and completely LOVE this! I love your idea of writing down different love stories that happen at different times and how good your character development is. While I loved the over all book I would definitely have to say Callie & Nick's stories were my favorites. Keep it up! :3

I love this story. Your ability to create so many different characters well is amazing, and basically I'm just in love with this. It's beautiful, and real. I'm definitely subscribing and recommending, because I'm in love.
I planned to only read part of it, but I read all of it and now I want more.
<3

Oooo, I love this! It's really kind of dark but in the best kind of way. I really enjoy the realism in it and your characterization is spot on! Your diction is both appropriate for your writing style and you have great consistency, I look forward to reading more.

I love the layout because it matched the storyline perfectly, and it flowed very nicely. The detail and the description were beautifully written, and I loved the picture you chose. Keep writing! (Very original idea)

I absolutely love this idea. I love the different characters and this whole idea is wonderful. I didn't like the way you spaced the chapters. Anyway, I like this. Didn't notice any errors, keep writing <3

I don't understand why this story isn't being piled up with comments. I love this!
Update!
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i adore this idea.
it's very creative and original.
makes me feel all warm inside. <3