A Faint Illusion - Comments

  • majoji

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    Awe, short, but I still liked it :)
    January 4th, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • majoji

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    I'd love to hear what music you listen to! :D

    Awe, I feel sorry for her! Must've been extremely awkward to find out that it wasn't a party there after all. :(

    (taha, I laughed hard now, Mari!)
    December 10th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • banana sykes.

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    Yes I do wish the chapters were longer, but your style of writing is very unique, and I love it. It reminds me a little bit like Ellen Hopkins style of writing!
    November 11th, 2011 at 09:11pm
  • majoji

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    Those eyes of his... they make me melt!
    I think I have to read that other story! :) I really like your writing. You keep it simple and clean. There's no confusion. Well, there is some, but that's because of the suspense you're building up by not telling us what has happened, hahah! :) I love this, and you're a sweetiepie! :D
    November 11th, 2011 at 02:26pm
  • ally...

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    This seems a little different than the average story, which I am really liking. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
    November 11th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • majoji

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    he's gorgeous, that's what he is!
    I'm subscribing.
    November 2nd, 2011 at 06:36pm