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  • purple_em

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    Just spent the past hour and something reading this. I definitely enjoyed it!
    April 18th, 2012 at 02:48am
  • TheHider

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    I loved this, I'm going to miss emails saying its been updated haha
    March 22nd, 2012 at 11:09am
  • dzsinidzsoni

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    I'm gonna miss this story:) and now I'm off to read your new story:);)
    March 22nd, 2012 at 01:12am
  • theashleycard

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    Loved this story so much! Cannot wait to continue reading your new one!
    March 21st, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • Laggg

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    aw, i loved the ending, but i'm sad its over :(
    looking forward to reading your new stories :) x
    March 21st, 2012 at 10:32pm
  • Snapback-Princess

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    That was the perfect ending to a perfect story! Well done, love! Xx
    March 21st, 2012 at 09:56pm
  • TheHider

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    Score!
    March 20th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Ahhh, I'll be so sad to see this end! Xx
    March 19th, 2012 at 08:56pm
  • unlost1996

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    Aw I'm so glad they ended up together! Sad this story is ending, but I'm really excited for your new story :D
    March 19th, 2012 at 08:34pm
  • saveredheads

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    I just read this entire story! Its absolutely perfect!!
    March 16th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Logan is such a sweetie! Great update, love! Xx
    March 14th, 2012 at 09:29pm
  • Pat Kirch.

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    Love this. :)
    March 14th, 2012 at 10:25am
  • dzsinidzsoni

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    disneyland*-* I like Logan :))
    March 14th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • Snapback-Princess

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    I feel really bad for Dan, but I'm quite biased so I probably shouldn't be feeling bad for him! Xx
    March 8th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • dzsinidzsoni

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    oww Dan :(( poor Sparrow:( I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
    March 8th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • dzsinidzsoni

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    agreed! poor Dan :(
    March 3rd, 2012 at 12:14pm
  • Snapback-Princess

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    She HAS to choose Dan, he is perfect.
    March 3rd, 2012 at 10:57am
  • Mr Reckless.

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    I really hope she chooses Dan, I mean, Nate is perfectly fine, but I can tell she feels more for Dan and she can't keep hiding that away. She's got to act on it.
    I also think Dan is doing the right thing by making her choose, no-one is going to keep getting hurt that way!
    Great update love! :D
    <3
    March 3rd, 2012 at 10:39am
  • Mr Reckless.

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    Why have I only just come across this?! OMG It's so good!
    I love the way you're portraying Dan and Nate as two completely different people! There's a real contrast there between them but you can tell why Sparrow likes them both!
    I'm really excited about this story!
    It's so good!
    <3
    February 29th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • dzsinidzsoni

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    Dan was right. but I wish they would get together *-*
    February 29th, 2012 at 01:21am
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