Shouting Under My Breath. - Comments

I'd kill for Dan and Sparrow to get together! Xx

poor Dan:( I really wish Nate would disappear:/

Awww, I hate Dan being sad! Fix ittttt! Xx

I wish sparrow would just break up with Nate. I want her to be with Dan again so bad! I understand that Dan is annoyed that Sparrow canceled to be with Nate, but she is his girlfriend. Oh dilemmas. Anyway, I really like this story! Also, I absolutely love the outfits you make for Sparrow!

I love the flashbacks with Dan, they are soo cute :)

Read this start to finish the other day but forgot to comment! Love this so much!

aww the end is amazing as usual :) and the gossip girl part was also great:D

The layout for this is absolutely beautiful!
And I love Sparrows name. Just from the summary I fell in love with this story!
I love the words at the beginning of every chapter! It's a creative idea!
When Sparrow first saw Dan again and started to cry - oh my god, that was so sad. I was like nooo :/
And when Nate texted her wanting to come over and she ditched him for Dan, I was like YES! That's right Dan is the man ;)
My favorite chapter so far was 8. They admitted to loving each other and it was just such a perfect moment!
The story is amazing! :)

omg that closet part was amazing:D can't wait for the next one :))

Oh shit, here it comes. I can't tell if Dan is actually going to hold strong on this or just give into Sparrow. Can't wait to find out though!! :)

i absolutely adore this story. i don't think its right the way shes using dan, but seriously if he was there and willing who wouldn't right ;) keep up the amazing work love xxx

Oh, and the tension builds. Nate's a dick, just saying.

just found this story and I really like it so far <3

This story is amazeballs

this story is amazing, i love what you've come up with so far, keep up the good work love :) x

Why the fuck haven't I been commenting lately?!

But the last chapter, the sexual tension between Sparrow and Dan is CRAZY! If I was Sparrow, I would be all over that hot boy<3

I love this and I can't help but to think how perfect your titles is for this story. I'm jealous that I didnt snatch it up first!

I love it sweetie. I'm glad you told me about it or I may have not read it. I hope she picks Dan. they are just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Awh, her and Dan are presh~ and that Nate just seems to be getting in the way. ;)

What the fuck, you already have three chapters up!

But back to the story, so far my favorite chapter. I love the interaction between them, its adorable. I love this story, I've told you many times already.

Oooooh. She doesn't want Dan to leave and she's already annoyed with the boyfriend? Hmmmmmm ;)
Can't wait for more!