I absolutely LOVE Robby and Maddie !!!!! THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS AWESOME !! I jux wish she would show jux a lil bit more feelings with him. I dont like how she jux be leaving him hanging. lol. And YAY, more clues are being revealed. hmm. UPDATE SOON !!!!! I <3 IT !!
OMFG !!!!!!!! Maddie and Robbie are ssssssooooooo CUTE !! I cant believe they kissed. I hope now maddie will finally realize what Robbie truely feels for her, because she be gettin me frustrated with her slowness. lol. Anyway, cant wait for next update. Please make it soon :)))
I didn't have any time so I only read the 1st chapter, but guess what, I already like it. I'll be loving it as soon as I continue reading. Please update soon!
Ok I hate to be that one commenter who everyone hates but I'm honestly saying this to help you make your story better. Some of the historical aspects of this story aren't true. In the summary you called it 19th century England. It's actually the 20th century. The 19th century consisted Of the years 1801-1900. From 1901 on it is called the 20th century. Weird, I know. But google it if you dont trust me. And I think if you haven't already it would be good to search the technology of this time period. By 1902 they already had the (very) basic model of car invented. Of course they called them automobiles then. Telephones have already been invented but of course not cell phones, as for the whole watch thing, I think Robby would have been able to guess what it is because even though wrist watches don't become popular until the 1920s there are pocket watches at this time. I hope I didn't come across like a naggy history teacher (because I'm not) but it would make your story better if it was completely accurate. Anyways it is still a great story!!!! :)