New to the Pack - Comments

loved the update..Jimmy and Jack are alike

Oh snapp hope etf leave her alone

just finished reading ur story and it is amazing!!!!!!! i cant wait for the next update

im glad there is another female now but its kinda bull poor caroline has to be at the bottom shes getting shit on in my opinion and its annoying as hell >.<

Arh ETF is so annoying!!

I'm happy that there is another girl for Caroline to be around. With all the male dominance being thrown around it has to be a relief to have some girl dominance in the house now. ETF needs to watch their back 'cause I'm pretty sure A7X won't let them get away with messing with Caroline like that.

Don't listen to them Caroline!! That must been awkward being the girl really there loved the update

you have such a great ideas~!!!
love this "cycle" ...situation...thing... xD

Please write more soon please please please :)
and i loved how you did the battle x3

Her cycle lol
Love this!!!

Omg update soon :D

we need more i get so excited when i get the notice just to have to wait for some free time to read it i can feel it getting good its cant wait for more

WRITE MOREE!!!

Poor Caroline...i hope sjhe doesn't run away

Haha aw poor Caroline. I'd hate to have a cycle like that.

I'm glad Johnny feels bad. HE SHOULD! But it's not his fault. Well it kind of is. And he should still feel bad. But it's okay. Kind of. He still hurt a girl.

Update soon :)

Haha nice with the stallion duck lol
Loove this

awesome! more please

that was funny update soon

update soon please

I taught myself to draw a really crappy picture of Jimmy chasing after a stallion duck, so I probably would have drawn that on my friends cast too hahah

The ending was so sweet :)

Can't wait for the next update! Update soon please!