New to the Pack - Comments

Of course Jimmy drew a picture of a duck lol..love that drawing

I'm disappointed Johnny won, but overall still an amazing chapter!

idk how i feel about who won but i liked the chapter

i'm glad Johnny won!!

this is amazing. i just have one tip: be careful with mixing up 'bowl' and 'bowel'. a bowl is something you eat ice cream out of. a bowel is a bodily tube where shit lives.
i find it hilarious whenever you say bowel, it's really entertaining, but using that in an essay or school work or something could turn out not so funny.
anyways, i love this story and hope you update soon!!

She fought well but it still sucks she lost.....great chapter tho :-)

I'm kind of surprised that Johnny won. With Caroline's powers of speed and hearing heartbeats, I was sure she would win. Well Johnny played fair...so I guess congrats to him for winning.

what i soo though she would have won!!!
either way great chapter!!!
love this

i didnt expect her to lost!!
But good chapter anyways, Cant wait for the next

Aw=[ Severely Disappointing That She Lost..Kinda Thought She Was Special..Guess Not So Much..Oh Well..Still Like The Story..

Johnny it's not nice to break wolf/people's arms! Yes, it was during the fight but jeez...

Update soon!

Aw Johnny won :(. That's okay though because Caroline was pretty badass haha

Thank you thank you thank you for keeping this as one chapter! I think I might have died of anticipation if you hadn't!

PLEASE update soon!

I kinda of had a feeling he'd win but they both did well. there both winners in my eyes

omg johnny is gonna be a dead man/ wolf lol
i love love love this!
i hope she wins the fight because it would be kickass and funny for johnny to be least dominate lol

i adore this story, you're very creative!
pretty awesome ideas~!

I don't know who I want to win! INNER TURMOIL!! Are the other guys going to get girlfriends? Update soon, please!

Can't wait for the fight, update soon!!!

love this please update soon

Hee hee. I'll comment one more time. :> I kind of have the feeling that Caroline will discover another gift during the fight. t(o u o t) I sure hope so.~

I. Love. This. Story. Your writing style is absolutely wonderful and most of the time I find myself wondering why I can't be Caroline. :) Update soon. As much as I love a good cliff hanger, I love having something to read. Thank you. c: