Naawww Darren's such a sweetie! He's not all bad, although I wish he wouldn't put his foot in it by saying his plan to get her is working! Anyway.. I would have left feedback on the other chapter but I've not been checking my e-mails therefore didn't know you'd updated :P Keep up the good writing (: Update soon. x
Her emotions might have been crazy, but I was a grinning fool. Friendship thus far, kind of. I love it. The characters are so real to me. Obviously Darren is a real person, but ya know? =D Happy girl. Excited for the next chapter.
I figured she would bolt. Who is she really angry at, though? Herself for kissing him back or Darren for the obvious? My guess is both. He's still trying, so maybe that says something about his character.
You're leaving it hanging like that? Le gasp! I must know what is going to happen. Ben is a creep. He deserved what was coming to him - and then some. Adds great drama to the already dramatastic plot.
I like how Darren turned a little sweeter towards Hailey when he dropped her home, maybe he isn't really as unkind as he appears to be. I really like this so far! :)
Finally got around to reading this! Thank goodness!
Scary encounter with the new guy. O.o Cutesy Darren-ness. I'm intrigued by his new way of achieving his goal and her attempts to put him off. Even though she's warming up to him.