Aw good for Baby Staal for finally getting his guts. I really liked this story and it looks like I'm moving onto the sequel. :) Keep on keeping on. <3 Lee
So I just read this whole story and I like it. :-) Jared is adorable and I love how shy he was this whole story. I was sad when they weren't together but I'm glad that they worked it out! This was a cute story and I can't wait for the sequal!!!! :-) <3
It was really good, the plot was awesome but I think you rushed through it a bit. Your chapters were kinda short and it was very choppy at times. But it's a really good story, I think you should do a sequel.