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  • JessLynn

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    Cute story!
    April 17th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Okay, I am obviously way late in reading this and commenting on it! I'm sorry about that, but better late than never, right? :)

    I can't believe it's over already! It was a really good story! I liked that Monroe finally told her father. It was obvious that Sid was never going to do it, and Ellie needed to be stopped. Plus, Monroe told her father that they were together! I'm really happy about that, and the fact that her father approved of the two of them. I laughed at his warning to Sid, that he would never play hockey again and that his body would never be found if he hurt Monroe. It sounds something any protective father would say :)

    And, you seemed to have left it open for a sequel, with Ellie not completely gone (not that she could ever be completely gone when she's in Monroe's family). I'm not sure if you're going to write a sequel or not, but if you ever do, you'll definitely have at least one reader!

    As I said before, this was a fantastic story! It was so different than other plot lines, and you wrote it really splendidly! I really enjoyed it from start to finish! :)
    March 24th, 2012 at 06:45am
  • hockeychick37

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    this was soooo good!!! u really should do a sequel or something!!! great job writing this!!!
    March 11th, 2012 at 02:38pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Wow, it's over already? Oh well, it was a great story and you kind of left us hanging with what's going on with Ellie, I hope she doesn't cause any more trouble for them. Great job.
    March 11th, 2012 at 12:57am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    They are so sweet together, but there's still the problem with Ellie *gets out baseball bat*
    March 10th, 2012 at 07:19pm
  • samemistakess

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    They are so adorable!!!
    March 10th, 2012 at 09:24am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    hell ya finally that witch is gone. Monroe is so much better
    March 10th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • dreamerforever

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    This story. Man, do I love it! Monroe an Sid make such an amazing couple.
    March 5th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • Gronk's Girl

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    oops, this is the link: http://hockeyfanfics.tumblr.com/
    March 4th, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Gronk's Girl

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    I really like this! Monroe is a great character and I like your portrayal of Sid. I submitted this story to a tumblr for hockey fan-fiction! http://stories.mibba.com/read/433733/Obligated-Hockey/
    March 4th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    That was so hot and so sweet, Sidney and Monroe are a great couple. But I am worried about them with Ellie and her dad, this could be a big problem. Can't wait to read more. :D
    March 2nd, 2012 at 02:57pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    Ahhh, I'm so behind on updates! I'm sorry! But I finally caught up! So, let me begin a few chapters back, saying Ellie's a bitch, like always. I can't believe she kept changing his apartment all around, especially to bother Monroe since she's memorized where everything sits so she can get around. And to dump all of his trophies and awards in the closet? Ugh, bitch.

    And Monroe and Sid finally got together! Yay! I thought it was super cute the way they got together, too. You could definitely tell that both of them were scared and nervous, but it was just so cute. And, Monroe tracing Sid's face so she could get a feel for how he looks. I loved it!

    I do wonder how this is going to affect everything that Sid's got going on with Ellie though. I mean, obviously he doesn't want to be with Ellie, but when she finds out she's going to flip out majorly! I can't even begin to imagine what she's going to do. She's not going to give up until she destroys both Sid and Monroe, I'm a little scared for the two of them haha.

    And, I wonder what's going to happen when Monroe's dad finds out about the two of them. I can understand why Sid's avoiding talking to him, but it's going to have to happen sooner or later!

    I absolutely adore this story! It's so good! I can't wait to read some more! :)
    March 2nd, 2012 at 04:17am
  • hockeychick37

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    love this almostas much as i love crosbys ringtone for ellie...UPDATE SOON!!!
    March 2nd, 2012 at 02:50am
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    Wonder why Sid hasn't talked to her dad about them yet.
    March 1st, 2012 at 11:08pm
  • Star Angel

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    Wow love this please update soon
    February 28th, 2012 at 10:50am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    Please update soon. Love this story
    February 27th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • halcyondays

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    ahhhh! this story is amazing! :)
    February 27th, 2012 at 01:18am
  • hockeychick37

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    i just found this and i LOVED it!!! hope u update it soon!!!
    February 27th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    That was so sweet and hot, great update. I hope Ellie doesn't fuck this up.
    February 26th, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • bublbabie

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    AWW I love how cute they are together and that they finally got together. What is going to happen with Ellie though? Will she find out?
    February 26th, 2012 at 09:55pm