Okay, I am obviously way late in reading this and commenting on it! I'm sorry about that, but better late than never, right? :)
I can't believe it's over already! It was a really good story! I liked that Monroe finally told her father. It was obvious that Sid was never going to do it, and Ellie needed to be stopped. Plus, Monroe told her father that they were together! I'm really happy about that, and the fact that her father approved of the two of them. I laughed at his warning to Sid, that he would never play hockey again and that his body would never be found if he hurt Monroe. It sounds something any protective father would say :)
And, you seemed to have left it open for a sequel, with Ellie not completely gone (not that she could ever be completely gone when she's in Monroe's family). I'm not sure if you're going to write a sequel or not, but if you ever do, you'll definitely have at least one reader!
As I said before, this was a fantastic story! It was so different than other plot lines, and you wrote it really splendidly! I really enjoyed it from start to finish! :)
Wow, it's over already? Oh well, it was a great story and you kind of left us hanging with what's going on with Ellie, I hope she doesn't cause any more trouble for them. Great job.
I really like this! Monroe is a great character and I like your portrayal of Sid. I submitted this story to a tumblr for hockey fan-fiction! http://stories.mibba.com/read/433733/Obligated-Hockey/
That was so hot and so sweet, Sidney and Monroe are a great couple. But I am worried about them with Ellie and her dad, this could be a big problem. Can't wait to read more. :D
Ahhh, I'm so behind on updates! I'm sorry! But I finally caught up! So, let me begin a few chapters back, saying Ellie's a bitch, like always. I can't believe she kept changing his apartment all around, especially to bother Monroe since she's memorized where everything sits so she can get around. And to dump all of his trophies and awards in the closet? Ugh, bitch.
And Monroe and Sid finally got together! Yay! I thought it was super cute the way they got together, too. You could definitely tell that both of them were scared and nervous, but it was just so cute. And, Monroe tracing Sid's face so she could get a feel for how he looks. I loved it!
I do wonder how this is going to affect everything that Sid's got going on with Ellie though. I mean, obviously he doesn't want to be with Ellie, but when she finds out she's going to flip out majorly! I can't even begin to imagine what she's going to do. She's not going to give up until she destroys both Sid and Monroe, I'm a little scared for the two of them haha.
And, I wonder what's going to happen when Monroe's dad finds out about the two of them. I can understand why Sid's avoiding talking to him, but it's going to have to happen sooner or later!
I absolutely adore this story! It's so good! I can't wait to read some more! :)