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  • Monroe;

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    Wow, what a unique idea! The names are so mythical, obviously; I really liked how inventive you've been with this. You have good description, grammar and a nice way of keeping the reader drawn into the idea.

    I agree with the comment below; I'd really like a translation to the greek. It's very intriguing, but it's very funny because I've seen this happen before with foreign people in my country. I even do it in my own language! It's hilarious to watch the puzzled looks!
    October 22nd, 2012 at 10:24pm
  • rosamarie

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    Haha, I love it so far! You have a gift for commedy. Soul reminds me a bit of myself and stuff. The twins are hilarious too. You should keep writing this, it's super good! Although...I wish there were translations for that Greek; I can't read a bit of it. Overall though, I'm looking forward to more! Keep writing! Mr. Green
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:32pm
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