Mindless Deception - Comments

Thank you all so much for the support! It means so much to me. :)

I was so happy to find a Transformers fan fanfiction! I love transformers but I have never seen a fanfiction for them! I think i may subscribe just because of that. It's so funny because in my head when they walk and stuff, I can hear the sound of all the mechanics moving. lol Oh! And i love how you have... what was it? "glitch head?" That was funny. I love silly stuff like that. Great job!

I love the way the writing glows. I think that's totally cool :D
I only really like the first transformers, and I pretty much hated the third (I didn't like the girl) but your writing is good and very detailed :D

I like the robot slang, it made me laugh and I couldn't spot a single mistake so well done! :D

I honestly have never seen Transformers, or know anything about it, so this story was a bit confusing for me. But on the other hand, it was so well written that I understood most of what was going on! You're a very detailed writer, which is amazing! Keep writing! Good luck!

I've never really seen anything about the Transformers on here, so this is weird, but in the best meaning of the word. Your writing is so detailed and, just utterly flawless that you don't want to stop reading! This story is gonna go far, I can just feel it. Good job and update soon.(:

This is a great story! Well detailed and well written - very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning pulled me in it makes me curious as to what is going to happen! Really Great job, keep it up!

The layout really bothers me, to be completely honest. I really, really dislike pre-made layouts. But your writing is just flawless and I love the transformers with a passion. You can't find many googd ones on here, and I like it a lot. Good luck with your writing.

This is a great story. I really love that your focusing on the transformers. Your writing is impeccable, and that's one of the main things that keep me reading is writing like yours. The robot slang has me smiling. I second Yhetena when she said try changing the layout; at least so the colors are easier on the eyes.

Yeah. Sorry about that. This whole mibba adventuring/writing is done on my smartphone. Thanks for letting me know! So glad I could make someone happy. ^_^

I did not know something this awesome existed on here. My whole life is fucking complete.
I'm a huge, huge Transformers fan and I am so happy right now that Comment Swap brought me here! I would never have enough intelligence to write something as amazing and truly quite complicated as this. Seeing as coming up with your own Transformers fiction is probably not the easiest thing. The plot so far seems really great and I can just tell you again: I LOVE IT. :3 <3 Update soon?

One thing though, Most part of the chapter seem to be in here twice, maybe you should check that over? o:

I've never read a transformers fic but I love the movies. The second one was hilarious! This is a really awesome story so far and I like how your character is an autobot instead of a human. I don't think I saw in mistakes in your writing. I would suggest getting or making a layout though instead of using a premade one.