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This was quite good. (:

I love this. I'm hands down going to subscribe. I'll leave a more detailed comment later.

i would definitely read it! i think it's a great idea<3
Sequels, FTW! xD

i would read a sequel!

awwww happy ending!!!!!!! **claps happily**

This was so good<3

*complaint is that it sound lime they're Scottish since you write It "teh" and "ova" etc. Still live it though! C:

I already love it and I'm barely on the 4th chapter! My only c

I actually really like how you ended this.
:P

awwwwwwwww i wanna cry now!!!!!!!! poor Oli!!!!!! :(

I need more! Seriously though, this is one of my favorite stories. I love it when you update(: fingers crossed Oli doesn't do something stupid, but he probably will. *sigh* Ally better come back and put hm in his place soon.

I can't take this seriously with all of the 'teh's and whatnot. I really can't. Just because everyone has an accent doesn't mean you have to write it in. I mean, this is a great story, great plot, just... when they talk I can't take it seriously, and this is a serious story.

Ohh yay!

I Love this story i cannot wait for the next chapter :)

I love the story! Can't wait for the rest of it. ^_^

Such a lovely author's note.

That was my favorite chapter so far.
I had a very vivid mental image of what was all going down with all the paint splattering.
xD

I just read this entire thing and I love it :)

They are so cute :) <3

aww...
that would be a pretty awesome date. =}