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  • flyers

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    God forbid I ever read a chapter of this whilst sad. Or even listening to sad music. I feel lik I have to blast The Maine or something so I dont cry :c.... But dont take that in a bad way. Because I really love this story its just so hard to read because its so sad. So I guess it really is well written. Provoking emotion is good. Okay I'm rambling. Great story. I love it. :)
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • di3-r0mantic

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    Omg, he caught her :3 I can't believe she can't see how skinny she is, I hope she gets help or Oli helps her, or something :x
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • lex;

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    Aw poor oli :c
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • RAWRamy

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    it's so sad ally can't see how bad she is getting :(
    update soon! thanks for the mention too :3
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • di3-r0mantic

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    I just read this story and I love it so far! It's amazing :3
    Please update soon! :D
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • xogabbyox

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    Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter :) I love the whole flashback thing at the beginning.
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • RAWRamy

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    Oli is on to her...
    Update soon!
    :D
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • lex;

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    Wow...but of course this won't fix her problems. She's in too deep already.
    November 29th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • RAWRamy

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    woah Oli is messing with her head :/
    update soon!
    November 29th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • RAWRamy

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    I love your Oli stories :)
    Poor Ally though :(
    Update soon!
    November 27th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • death2hipsters

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    Argh, I love this!!!:D
    November 27th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • Kylene

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    i absolutely love this! best story you've written in my opinion, & they were all fantastic so that says a lot(: update soon, please. i won't beg unless you make me:D
    November 27th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • xogabbyox

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    Love it! Can't wait to read more! :)
    November 27th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • lex;

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    I love this story so much already c:
    November 27th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • death2hipsters

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    I love this <3 :3
    November 27th, 2011 at 03:35am
  • GrimmOSauris

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    love it:))))
    subscribed:)))))
    November 26th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • asyousleep;

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    Comment virginity has been taken by me ;)
    I think this story is going to be really good!
    I can never get enough BMTH stories!
    I can't wait for more!
    November 26th, 2011 at 10:12pm