Steal and Return - Comments

The first paragraph of this really drew me in. How it was said there was similar events then turned it around and said "Actually, if you want to be so specific you could call it exact, I'd never in all my years heard of a predicament even similar." which really caught my eye and drew me in.

I was a bit shocked to be honest, when it started with the princess talk and the royalites and whatnot, it wasn't what I was expecting but it's nice to read something unique, instead of it just being regular teenagers, I think it adds that extra little twist.

"I'm here to kidnap you." He gave me a smile that put the stars to endless shame. "I hope that's alright."~ I loved this as an ending line, it was really strong but had humour and really showed that there was a lot of potential for the story :D

Wow! This story is hilarious and totally has an intriguing charm to it that just yanks you into it. The princess is spoiled (not that that isn't a given XD) and the prince seems too good to be true. Aha, and I must say, I love the kidnapper! He's so cocky and just plain out funny--reminds me of Westly from The Princess Bride.

Keep this story going, please! I love it! ^.^

This is really good, I like what you both have so far :) The layout is really cool :) I love the kidnapper's character, she seems so....anti rules for lack of a better word (sorry i'm half asleep). The last line of the first chapter is still stuck in my head, "I'm here to kidnap you, hope you don't mind" love it. Can't wait to see how this continues, good job.

Ahhhh continue its amazing so far