The Substitute Teacher. - Comments

  • BarakatIero

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    NEVER STOP WRITING </3
    This is too amazing.
    I met the Maine tonight klsjdfklsdjfsd so this is extra cute to read c: <3
    January 22nd, 2012 at 03:26am
  • bob morley

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    Delicious.
    I think John and Garrett should just get married.

    But that's just me.
    Can't wait for more!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Tattoo

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    I really like this so far :D
    January 22nd, 2012 at 03:03am
  • imperfecktion

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    That was ridiculously sweet
    January 22nd, 2012 at 02:14am
  • crescendo.

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    How the hell didn't I comment on the last chapter?
    I thought I had.
    Well, shit. I'll have to get better on that.
    January 22nd, 2012 at 01:03am
  • maxx danziger

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    Aw, that was absolutely adorable xD
    Who wouldn't like Garrett?! You're a sweetheart, Garrett.
    They're being pretty intimate for student and a teacher. Hehe, I have a feeling John is already gettings feelings for Garrett ;)
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:32am
  • N0T ACT1V3

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    Nononononononononono. Dun' stop. I iz stil hereeeeee. D:
    Amg. So. Fucking. Cuteeeeeee. Ahhhhh. >w<
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:16am
  • deariloveyou

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    Awww how cute was that? Cute as hell, that's how cute it was. And even cuter <3 update soon?
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:13am
  • JessLoui

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    did anyone else also imagine john cooking for them in nothing but an apron or was that just me...LOVED IT!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:06am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    When I woke up a few hours later, I was in
    Mr. O'Callaghan's arms.

    There's a for sure good step in the right direction x)

    I looked up at his face, smiling at how calm and
    cute he looked.

    Oh maaan. That's far from how he looks in the
    chapter I just typed! LOL

    "Sweetheart, I won't be home tonight."
    Good. More John and Garrett time c:

    "I'll stay here as long as you like. I'm not going anywhere."
    So... he's not leaving? 'Cause I'm sure Garrett
    never wants him to xD

    Without further hesitation, I leaned in and took a small sip of it.
    Y'know, to me, someone feeding you soup means alot.
    So you have to realize, I'm freaking out and making weird
    faces o;

    Cause it isn't everyday your teacher takes you home, hold you
    while you cry, and makes you soup. AND then proceeds to
    feed it to you. x)

    Sitting on the couch and motioning to his lap.
    o; Holy smokes! That IS a big LEAP in the RIGHT DIRECTION! :D

    "Pat..."
    ROTFL. Pat.

    "And me. Always me."
    He will. All of You. Someday

    <3
    January 21st, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • BarakatIero

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    God, I hold such love for this story<3
    January 20th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • BarakatIero

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    God, I hold such love for this story<3
    January 20th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    He's just so annoying and talks all the time.
    Such a nice way to talk about your best friend xD

    "Tell me what it is that I'm holding up to you."
    My mind is still stuck in the perverted-ness I got
    in the last chapter x)

    "But then you'll think I'm a giver-upper."
    I'm sure his mind is far in other places.. ;D

    I checked my phone and saw a few texts from Nick.
    Dont you mean: A few texts from the almost ex-boyfriend?

    Hell, the cats even looked scary here.
    ROTFL. Hilarious.

    "A cute thing like you.... well, you never know."
    A positive step in the right direction of getting rid of the
    fake ginger :D

    I cut the engine and got out of my Volvo.

    ZOMG. ROTFL. LOL. HAHA. THAT'S A MOMMY
    CAR! -laughs obnoxiously- And a sparkling vampire
    car.. xD No offense, I hope that's not like, your
    dream car or whatever..

    "I just don't like you staying up here alone. It's not safe,"
    GOOD. GOOD. Feeling protective already! :D

    "Yeah, and I'm twenty-three, honey."
    Pet names! We're getting closer!
    -insert squeal-

    My heart tightened when I saw that he had starting
    crying, tears starting to streak his angelic face.


    YES. YES. YES. YES. Heart tightening! That's
    good! All we need is for something along the lines
    of: I could hardly breath, the pressure was
    starting to build up, a strong sensation suddenly
    overtaking me.
    lol

    "I'm here for you."
    That's even better! =)

    AND YES. HE DOES! o; I know, right? lol
    I'll send you the links..

    <3
    January 20th, 2012 at 01:15am
  • maxx danziger

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    Oh my gosh, that was unbelievably cute xD
    That whole thing when John said he was going to protect him! Awww.
    January 19th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • JessLoui

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    i have like the biggest grin on my face right now!
    January 19th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • Pioneer;

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    So cute! I love them both@ They should just get together like now...
    January 19th, 2012 at 04:06am
  • N0T ACT1V3

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.Poor garrett. Nice john. :3
    January 19th, 2012 at 02:32am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    Aweeeee :( poor garrett. But DAMN PAT! WHY YOU RUIN THEIR TOGETHER TIME?!
    January 16th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I tugged on my bear hat.
    I WANT ONE SO BAD! D;

    "I’m going to run to the bathroom, okay? Oh,
    nice hat. It’s cute”

    When I read that I pictured an old, nice grandma
    knitting a scarf. Not tall, chest haired, John O'Callaghan
    who was stubble. xD

    I bent over and took it out.
    That's a violation of privacy. How could he?!
    o;

    Did John draw it?
    Well, he could've paid some kid who's gifted
    artistically... just saying c:

    Damn you, Puberty.
    YES. YES. YES. YES. My voice sounds weird
    too. It makes me awkward..

    "I decided that maybe you could watch me do it?”
    So.. yeah, confession. I skimmed a little bit, y'know,
    to make sure John didn't run in a slap him across the
    face or whatever..

    And yeah, that didn't sound right. I was like o;
    in the classroom?! On the desk?! HOW?!

    “Do I have to watch?” I whined
    And uh, that didn't help my perverted mind either.
    'Cause I'm like, "WHY YOU COMPLAINING?!"

    “You know, if someone passes by and hears you screaming
    like that, they’ll think I’m raping you in here.”

    rotfl. i'm talking about sex x)

    “Hi, Mr. O’Callaghan,” Pat sang.
    I pulled away from him, annoyed, and crossed my arms.
    Damn him.


    PAT! GOSH. YOU FUCKING BASTARD. YOU INTERRUPT
    EVERYTHING >.> I was just starting to get over my grudge
    for you x)

    <3
    January 13th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • N0T ACT1V3

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    And also, i checked my email this morning and saw the ipdate but didn't have time to read it so when i did my exam this morning i was all distracted and thinking about john and garrett and pat. Suffices to aay, i'm fairly certain i failed that exam. xD
    Okies. Night night now. :3
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:05pm