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  • N0T ACT1V3

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    I'm too tired to make a coherent comment so i'm jst going to explain how i believe Garrett is feeling; BEJAHSBAKXNALXKENOSBSAJKDENXISNAHXKCOANHDIWNX.YAY.
    Mmkay? Good. Write more. Me read.
    :3
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:05pm
  • Pioneer;

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    Awww I want more...
    January 12th, 2012 at 09:35pm
  • maxx danziger

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    Damn Pat, for a second I actually thought the same thing as Garrett that John was the one hugging him. NOT FAIR.
    I'd have the same reaction if I saw someone skin a cat...that's just disgusting.
    Can't wait to read another chapter ^^
    January 12th, 2012 at 06:04pm
  • JessLoui

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    i am going to hurt pat soon
    January 12th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • crescendo.

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    Very adorable. And friggin' Pat!
    January 12th, 2012 at 05:08am
  • deariloveyou

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    Aww poor kitty. Nice chapter, I love it <3 update soooooon ;3
    January 12th, 2012 at 04:28am
  • crescendo.

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    Freakin' Rachel. What a hoebag.
    Garrett is a freaking doll. And he is not aloud to say otherwise.
    And go John Ohh! You show the bitch
    January 10th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • maxx danziger

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    Rachel is really mean.
    And Pat accidentally spilling the beans...silly boy!
    I'm wondering what's going to happen between Nick and John for things to change a little :)
    Oh Garrett, you are attractive. You're gorgeous.
    That's probably what John is thinking xD
    January 9th, 2012 at 11:39pm
  • JessLoui

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    haha rachels a bitch
    and pats just the awesomeest of awesome
    and john drew garrett...thats just alkjsdffa;iklghskrifsuhdgturoihf
    January 9th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    Oh my gOodness what a coinkadink! I hate children too!!
    Favorite character- john cornillius OHHHHH.
    n__n
    Update.
    Like...
    EVERYTHIG
    January 9th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    “Well, you should know that he’s gay. So he’ll probably check
    you out every chance he gets. Just a warning. It’s kind of
    creepy, you know? I mean, I used to like him! But that was before
    I found out he was a loser and liked his own kind."


    WTF IS THIS HOES PROBLEM? WHY IS SHE BEING SUCH
    A FEMALE DOG?! o; Geez.

    “You should know that I’ve been with my boyfriend for two years.”
    I like the fact that he owned her. But I hate that his
    boyfriend is Nick. Ew. He's too adorable to hate. UGH.

    “Who knows, maybe some guys too… Ow! Garrett, we do not kick
    our best friends, you asshole! Ow! You douchebag, stop it!”

    I never though Pat would have such a potty mouth x)
    Annnnd, that's my favorite part :D

    "Yeah, I’m alright. I just woke up from a nap. The apartment’s so
    weird without you. I miss you,”

    Yeah. Miss hime while you can. 'Cause he's gonna your white
    ass for Garrett's.... white ass? lol FAIL. And yeah, I realized something.
    Nick's probably still going to miss him when John does
    leave him for Garrett. I couldn't blame him though xD

    I had just drawn Garrett Nickelsen.
    Nake, right? 'Cause clothes do him no justive. I mean, yeah,
    he's gorgeous in tight pants... But I like him better with
    nothing x)

    <3
    January 9th, 2012 at 02:52am
  • Pioneer;

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    Ughhhhh I LOVE them! Jarrett <3 update soon!
    January 9th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • N0T ACT1V3

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    But then tbh, if it was for Nick Santino, how could he say no to anything? Especially if Nick POUTS? So so vry cewt. <3 jus' sayin'.
    And also Pat is so amazing and cute and irritating to Garrett and funny and not subtle at all and loooooooool. <33333
    January 9th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • N0T ACT1V3

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    Well, if nick wants kids and you don't, john, you should just leave him and fuck garrett instead, yeah? ;3
    And awww. Poor pattycakes getting kicked like that. :c
    Omg. RACHEL GOT PWND. HAW. HAW. ~happy dance of happiness~
    Ya know, i'm very upset with you and your trashing of the elephant boy that i'm no sure i will go check out the twix boy. I'm VERY upset... Who am i kidding, of course i'm gonna check it out... ._. STILL UPSET THOUGH.
    January 9th, 2012 at 01:04am
  • BarakatIero

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    This is one of the best stories I've read on here and it's my favourite<3
    You're amazing<3
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • ahoy-

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    update c: i already love this!
    January 7th, 2012 at 02:47am
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    The author's note made me laugh xD
    Actually a lot of this did?
    You're really good at putting humor in your stories :))
    “Call me Mr. Ohh, if you want.” I was like Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh xD
    And then I read on and Garret was thinking the same as me :O
    We has so much in common :P
    LOVED THIS BIT: Maybe tomorrow we were going to learn about sex positions. Or maybe he was going to do a demonstration with us… I’d love to volunteer, just saying. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Dirty Garret :P
    And John was sooooooooo flirting back there. Teachers aren't meant to do that stuff man. They get in trouble for that :)
    John likes trouble though haha
    AND I LOVES PAT AND HIS SHOELACE!
    I have no idea what it is about your Pat characters xD I just always end up seriously loving them!
    January 6th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • maxx danziger

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    Mr.Ohh=porn star.
    Lol, Garrett.
    I nearly stopped breathing when you wrote the part about John leaning in, probably the same reaction as Garrett had...and then I read on and realized nothing happened xD
    Rachel was mean D: Stupid stupid.
    LOVE IT, update ? :D
    January 6th, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • horror.

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    don't ever get rid of this. okay?
    January 6th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    “I won’t rape you, Garrett,” he said, rolling his eyes and
    motioning for me to come towards him.

    Can't rape the willing!

    “This might sting,” he warned, taking my hand and running
    the water over it.

    It always does at first! That's why you're suppose to go slow.
    LOL If you haven't realized, I'm still talking about sex and
    stuff..

    “It hurts,” I whimpered. “Are you done yet?”
    NO ONE FINISHES THAT FAST! ROTFL.
    I'll stop now x)

    “What the fuck, man? Is he a porn star?!”
    OMG. PAT. LOL YOU'RE SO OBNOXIOUS.
    It's cute. <3

    “You’re so adorable when you stutter!” she squealed. “So you
    know how Kennedy told me to stop talking to you? I mean, I know
    you’re gay and all, but how cool would it be if I converted you
    back?! But when I told him that, he told me I was a dumb whore.
    Who does that?! But what I’m trying to tell you is that you’re a loser
    and no one likes you so you should just die.”

    WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF.
    Is she serious? I just- Nevermind. Let's just leave it at
    she's crazy.

    <3
    January 6th, 2012 at 03:20am