Crystal Ball - Comments

No, no, no, no! I need more, don't do this to me!

awww i love this story :)

i love this so much! update soon please x

I've just found this fic and omg it's perfect. Waaaaa I just wish Alex would stop being a jerk and just get over himself!
You write incredibly well, there's a couple of grammatical errors here and there but we all make them so it only shows you're human, also please don't take offence by this comment (I've had people attack me for correcting them, I'm sorry the grammar nazi in me just can't be tamed).
I also love your characters, like you've portrayed their personalities amazingly well and left enough each side of the past and the present tenses to represent their histories. Brilliant. You're incredibly talented :)
~Jack's Creativity

Please update! I love this story it's so good! The characters are adorable and real. Very good can't wait for more!

First off I want to say how much I adore the way you write! When I got to the start of chapter 2 I instantly found myself smiling from the way you portrayed the characters together. It was so sweet to see how natural Alex and Emma are together - I love it! :')

Secondly, I need to comment on how much I love the layout you've used! Along with the chapter separators - it's beautiful! :D

And last of all, I really like the use of past and present in each chapter - it's a really interesting way of filling us in with some background information a little bit at a time.

Great job - I shall be reading on, I love it! Keep up the good work!

I absolutely adored this! It was so refreshing compared to a lot of the stories that I've been reading lately.

I think the thing that stuck out the most to me and that made me fall in love with this was (even though I've only read the first chapter) the way that you perfectly balanced various aspects of Emma's life instead of only focusing on romance, only focusing on raising her child, or only focusing on family. I also really liked that this opening chapter did an amazing job establishing Emma as a charcter through the way that she interacts with her family.

My only suggestion as far as concrit goes, given I've only read the first chapter, is that I would've liked to have read more description of Emma herself physically because I couldn't really grasp much of a visualization of her in my mind. Granted, I'm not saying that there should be paragraphs upon paragraphs of physical description, but I need a little something here and there.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this, and I wish you luck as you continue to work on it :)

This is really, really good. :3

This is really, really good. :3

I love Alex Gaskarth so when I got this on comment swap I was really happy. I think I've seen this before, but I just never read it. I like your writing style a lot! :) I'm only on like the fourth chapter right now though, but keep it up! :)

This is really, truly riveting. I'm finding myself enjoying it, though it's not really my exactly my favorite type of story. Your font is a little hard to read, but other than that I don't have any complaints. I do love the layout. I'll probably stick it out for a little longer but I'm not sure if I'll read it to the end. Fantastic work.

Very good story, I read the first couple of chapters and it is very well written. It is hard, sometimes, to successfully captivate readers with nothing but the opening paragraph but I have to admit that you did very well in that respect. Keep up the great work, it is very well done!

While I like the story, and I did make it to chapter five, I realized about the third of the way through that, even though I enjoyed it, it's really not my cup of tea so to speak.

I like the layout. It's simple, and yet it looks fancy. However, I think the lines in the paragraphs should be spaced a bit father apart. That way, others won't read the same line three times before realizing they have already read it, like I did.

Other then that, and the fact it isn't really my preferred type of story, what I read was very well written, and easily enjoyable to those who like to read a story like this.

Keep writing you are very good at it.

FINALLY! Comment swap gives me a good story! :D haha. I absolutely love Alex Gaskarth! This story is so cute! You're a wonderful writer, that's for sure. If I could change one thing, it would be the layout. The words are a little too close and it makes it a little difficult to read, but other than that, it's perfect! :)

I'm only on chapter 5, but this story is really cute! Janie is adorable as can be! I also like how you switch between past and present every chapter, and they are all really well-written. I'm going to keep reading and maybe even subscribe. Keep up the good work!

I liked this chapter. Janie is adorable :D and I really don't like Vanessa, i was happy when Rian and Sarah said they didn't like her lol.
Update soon!!

this story is amazing!(: please update soon :D

Love the switching back and forth. Past Emma is so cute!

Past Alex is adorable <3

Past Alex is the best!