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  • The Silence;

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    Love this story!
    May 20th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • halcyondays

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    This story is incredible!
    May 19th, 2012 at 02:35am
  • nikkiniknak12

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    great chapter! :) i'm not too sure about max though.. even though he hasn't done anything wrong.. ha :)
    May 19th, 2012 at 12:56am
  • Wendy.

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    Ohhhhh Alex needs to step in NOW!
    I'm not so sure about Max, and Janie calling him dad is SO not a good thing.
    I can't wait to see how this plays out :)
    May 19th, 2012 at 12:33am
  • Zombiexlollipop

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    This is pretty good :D
    Keep going! And I hope Alex talks to her, instead of ignoring her :(
    May 19th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • Wendy.

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    Favorite Chapter :)
    I loved this. I seriously look forward to every Sunday because that's when you update. haha.
    I cannot waitttt for the next chapter!
    April 30th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • Vics03

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    Ahh, this story is so good! Thank you for writing it :) it's brilliant
    April 24th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • NerdGlasses

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    You are killing me here honestly
    April 24th, 2012 at 02:22am
  • Wendy.

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    I adore this story! I cannot waiiit to see what happens between Emma & Alex :) The switch between past & present is amazing & I love that your writing doesn't make me want to throw a dictionary at my computer, plus the characters are VERY well rounded. I feel like some people leave that lacking in their stories but you definitely do not. I can't believe you haven't gotten tons and tons of comments on this story! Either way, I can't wait til next Sunday for the next update :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 12:01am
  • Stay With Me:-.....

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    I really like this story :) i like how we get the present and the past. Good job :) x
    March 29th, 2012 at 08:57pm
  • dreamer4life247

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    Hey this is really good so far and I'm glad that its so well written and I'm suprised at the lack of comments but don't worry about it cause this is pretty good and I dont usually give critic. The only thing I would ask is since your only updating on sundays it would be more fulfilling if the chapters were longer. But good job I totally respect stories with no spelling mishaps :)
    March 28th, 2012 at 01:58am
  • NerdGlasses

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    YES! YES! YES! YES!
    March 28th, 2012 at 01:11am
  • Canijust

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    Please continue!
    February 27th, 2012 at 03:20am