Ohhhhh Alex needs to step in NOW! I'm not so sure about Max, and Janie calling him dad is SO not a good thing. I can't wait to see how this plays out :)
Favorite Chapter :) I loved this. I seriously look forward to every Sunday because that's when you update. haha. I cannot waitttt for the next chapter!
I adore this story! I cannot waiiit to see what happens between Emma & Alex :) The switch between past & present is amazing & I love that your writing doesn't make me want to throw a dictionary at my computer, plus the characters are VERY well rounded. I feel like some people leave that lacking in their stories but you definitely do not. I can't believe you haven't gotten tons and tons of comments on this story! Either way, I can't wait til next Sunday for the next update :)
Hey this is really good so far and I'm glad that its so well written and I'm suprised at the lack of comments but don't worry about it cause this is pretty good and I dont usually give critic. The only thing I would ask is since your only updating on sundays it would be more fulfilling if the chapters were longer. But good job I totally respect stories with no spelling mishaps :)