Water Valkies - Comments

can't wait for you to update more!

More please!

The way you describe things is so easy and clear to read; I can picture it all happening in my mind so well. The backstory is also really interesting as well – I’m not normally one for fantasy or sci-fi but the explanation about the Valkies and how they’re given their powers is intriguing. The relationship between Rip and Sei is genuine while still being cute, and your dialogue comes across as very natural and genuine. The combination of fantasy while still having the romance is a great balance and I like how you’ve maintained it throughout the story. :) And not to mention the suspense and surprises! The mixing of genres is something that not a lot of writers can do, but you’ve done so beautifully.

Oooo, Kray found out about the parents. Need more story or I'll die! Not really but I can't wait for your next update!

Gah!!! Sei you are so freaking adorable!!! I find everything you do just so cute!! Love you Sei and Rip <3 You'll be my boys forevers

[colour=690909]Haha I just love this story! Finished what's up in a day, and Sneak has gotta be my favourite, he's so cool <3
Aaaaanyways... THE PARENTS ARE MADE!?! Creepy... O.o
And y u no upload? We miss Sei and Rip!

Story is amazing please update soon and I am in love with rip and sei!!

So it has been forever since I commented and read the new updates. I missed a few and I think I accidentally skipped over the chapter where Jux was introduced.....

Anywho, i love the idea of the side oneshots:) and for thr sequel, that would bd awesome too as long as the new secy boy gets his own man:P haha jk

And as for your 3 week hiatus, I have a story that Im going to post for in the next few days that I havent updated in about 9/10 months...yeah, I fail. Lol, so dont feel bad about your absense^.^

I probably forgot something, but ill just have to say it later. Update soon!:)

Okay first of all hiya, it has been a while! Secondly, where have you been?!?! I've been waiting forevers for this! I missed you and the boys, jeez...
Small rant over, now I'd like to say WAIT the parents are made?! That isn't at all creepy... *sarcasm*
Can't wait for your next update! :)

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY A LOT HEHEEHE :-)

Aww so sweet! :) I like Sneak! Hope he doesn't turn out all evil and whatnot because that would be a bit of a disappointment... then again... anyway can't wait for your next update like always! ;)

btw just saying that if you had something major happen sometime soon that would peak my interest. Maybe have something happen to Sei or something... just throwing out an idea unless you have something planned :)

Yay update! Excitement!
Just saying you'd better not stop writing this story cause I will keep reading no matter what and will bug you until you update! :) Also if I said that the one-shot and sequal idea was the bestest idea ever will that count as 3 responses since you already have 2?
Can't wait for your next update!

As muc as we talk about this every time i see you ans spent Sunday night Google -horeing for this! Had to leave a comment about the flashback! I LOVE HIS MOM! And you WILL do the oneshots or else I'mma do something bad that i haven't thought of yet! I really want a Sei and Sneak oneshot cos I LAHV them! God help me! xD #MeWantsMore

You should totally do the sequel and one-shot thingy! I will wubs you forever if you did! Just sayin baby Rip is soooo adorable! :)

D'aww! They are so adorable together! I can't wait for your next update! :D

I wanna know what Sneak did!!! :)

I feel sad that she's all locked up but at least she has Sneak, right? :)

*Gasp* A conspiracy?!?! lol Can't wait for your next update!

i loved when you said haunches:D
I could totally picture Pheonix as the wolf and little Sei as a bunny rabbit adorable!!!

anyway, you know you want pheonix/sneak. ;)