A Ship in Harbor is Safe - Comments

Great chapter, I'm secretly hoping for somthing between those two to blossom. I can't wait for more

Awwwww, Sid and Athena are so....cute. That is literally the only way to describe them. More soon?

Sid is asking her out ad her dad is on a date

I definitely felt her and Sid's excitement in this chapter! And I needed that after watching my team lose again. It was devastating. I think there might be a plane ticket or something of that sort in the envelope. Maybe SId wants her to move to Pittsburgh so she'd have somewhere to wear that jersey! Maybe that's wishful thinking on my part. I have no idea where her dad went, we don't really know enough about him to really guess that sort of thing, unless you're implying it has something to do with Athena. But I still have no idea. Unless he went to get Sid, whose coming to get her? So they can move her to Pittsburg?And this guessing game needs to stop now! Lol. I can't wait for more! :)

this is amazing!! I cant wait to hear what is going to happen with her and sid.

So is it an alcohol problem that she used to have or am I reading too much into the tipsy thing. I probably am. Anyway, I miss Sid. He needs to come for a visit!

Love it

Sorry I haven't been commenting...I decided to take a break from my computer since I went on break.

Anways, I'm back...for now. Loved the chapters and I can't wait for more. Keep it up! =)

oh loved the first chapter!

More, More, More! Lol! I really love the plot and while normally, I'm not a big fan of sequels, I definitely feel like there is more to this story and I can't wait to see what it is. The ONLY criticism I have is maybe add some more details here and there. (I was a bit confused at the beginning, wondering if her father was mad at her. An easy fix by adding "her father yelled, playfully yet sternly" or something much more eloquent than what I can come up with. Just another reason I'm the reader and you're the writer. Rofl!) But it's great! Can't wait for more!

I'm really looking forward to this. Can't wait to see Sidney and Jordan fight and Sid and Athena get closer. :)