I still haven't finished all of the chapters yet, but from what I've read, this is a pretty decent story! I love the mystery :) The title is awesome, and Max is my favourite character, so far! I have subscribed, and I look forward to reading more! Ps the layout is really cool!
Oooooh! I got mentioned in the A/N!!! :P lol! You don't have to say sorry about it!!! It would have been better if you didn't change P.O.V's so much. Like do the thing in Max's P.O.V and then Rose's you know. Hope you don't mind me telling you this. ^_^ I really enjoyed it... can you write faster??? :P
I like! Update again soon:3 writers block is just your mind saying its too overwhelmed to be creative. Force yourself to take some time to think about your writing and that should help. Just make sure to keep writing no matter how terrible you think it is. Fix later:3 that always helps for me.