Animal Attraction - Comments

i don't know who they are yet, but am gonna go look em up, those guys are smokin hot!

Congrats on having a first ever fan fic! :D That's actually pretty neat. No idea who these people are though... But I get that a lot from Comment Swap. The first few chapters were really interesting, they flowed along nicely. I saw a few small grammatical errors though, nothing too big and it wasn't so distracting that it took away from the plot ;)