i would just like to say this is the most amazingly written story i think i have ever read, like i think its the best written story on here. plus, you reduced me to tears in this chapter. keep up the amazing work love x
As someone who has read romance novels for 10+ years, I have to say that your love scenes are impeccably written. While it is super sad and upsetting, I'm glad Logan had the guts to tell Dan about the baby before they continued on. The detail of emotion that you included was amazing and made the chapter all the more real. Great stuff, and I can't wait for more!
SON OF A BITCH what a fucking twist, AND RIGHT AFTER they had sex. She could've at least waited for him to be decent. God, I don't even have words to explain how I feel at this very moment.
SO MANY EMOTIONS. I am actually crying at the moment, it was all so beautiful and they were going to be together forever and then THIS happens and it's not fair. It's just not fair. I want them to be alright, it's meant to be Logan and Daniel forever and ever, it's not meant to be like this. I just want to know what happens so badly. I hope they'll be okay. <3