..................this was a terrible thing to read the second I rolled out of bed in the morning. I'm sitting here, messy hair and all, screaming into a pillow because my roommate's still asleep. I don't know how you make me feel these feels that I'm feeling, but kasljdoasidfloasd
Absolutely incredible chapter though, as always. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
I only read/subscribed to this about 2 hours ago, so I'm still kind of excited about it :') Anyway, as much as I love this update, I really just want to bash their heads together. It's not even as if there's one of them I can blame, because they're both partially in the wrong. Can't wait until the next update.
Absolutely beautiful. Every word you write is completely amazing. Logan and Dan are perfect for each other. I'm so in love with the way you wrote Dan. He's just such a gorgeous, gorgeous man and you wrote him almostly perfectly. He is basically the perfect man. He's sensitive, sweet yet there is this raw side to him. The way he takes control and god, I want that boy! I love this and I can not wait for another update.
I just re-read the entire story, and I must say that your attention to detail is amazing. This is a characteristic I love to find in stories, and it definitely isn't lacking in yours. You've created likeable and well-rounded characters, and I feel so invested in Dan and Logan. You are telling an excellent story, and I can only continue to hope that they will find their happily ever after. Can't wait for more!
This chapter just encompasses everything that Logan and Dan are. In Love. This was beautiful - just the way you wrote it was beautiful, you could really see how much they loved each other and how much they'd missed each other and ultimately how much they physically need each other to be alright. Beautiful, just beautiful - i'm having a hard time in putting how I felt about this chapter into words. You know I love this story and I can't wait to see how you end it (HAPPILY OR ELSE OKAY?!) <3
This story is AMAZING omg. I never comment on stories unless I really like them. This is beautifully written and it has so much depth, more so than a lot of other fanfics. Been waiting for an update for forever! I hope you update!