A Lonely Road - Comments

I died a little when I read the part about virgins being like dragons. LOL. Good job.

I died a little when I read the part about virgins being like dragons. LOL. Good job.

Excuse me while I go and stick my head in the freezer.. Fucking hell!!

Not ashamed at all to say this is another one I'll be bookmarking to re-read, this is brilliant!! I can't believe I haven't read this already! Shame on me XD the very first paragraph had me laughing, her little rant, talking to herself, singing out loud, totally something I would do LOL

So many lines in this that had me laughing my head off, mostly Jimmy and Jess's dialogue, the banter that they had was hilarious!! The first thing he says upon meeting her, "are they real?" Oh James! I really like that the girl in this was all woman, only a real woman has tits and ass XD

Oh my god, Jimmy's virgin line that was priceless!! And Johnny, oh my poor little Johnny, he's such a cutie! "So I've got chick cum all over me?"

That sex scene though i can't think of a better way to lose your virginity than having a gang bang with Avenged Sevenfold, that would make my entire life! Hahaha.

You be the queen of smut, my love, holy shit! And you added some Bratt too, be still my beating heart!! That was amazing! Loved the ending, those two hunks claiming her as theirs and hugging her, that's one Bratt sandwich I'd love to be the filling of

Awesome awesome story! :D

Holy fucking hell, am I dreaming or is this reality? This was so incredibly fucking hot, I need the coldest of cold showers and Brian and Matt all up in my room. Just. Oh my fucking god.

Seriously I'm just now reading this?
dear Lord I need a shower.
this was amazing

I can't believe what I just read.. I re-read this actually and holy fuck.. I need to change my panties, and future panties. Oh god.. I can't even right now. I loved Matt and Brian and Jimmy and Zacky but Johnny was the cutest little thing ever.

I can't even right now..

Okay, look at me.
Tears.
Tears over the best smut I've read in a long long time.
jesus christ woman, I read this in the middle of class. middle of class. in front of people. iefhcsufhwksgeu but it was great.

wow, there were so many good things about this. Obviously the sex was hot hot hot!, but the line about virgins being like dragons had me cracking up, and Jimmy's wild character was awesome, but he best was Syn and Matt. Damn! Love the dominant and possessive traits..so sexy! and she was a virgin?! what a way to lose your V card! loved it! awesome job:D

Wow! What a way to lose your virginity! This was honestly amazing! You had me in fits up until the sex and then I was simply in awe! And I love the fact Jessica is Australian ^_^ Represent! Haha! You had me completely with the dragon line: “That’s because virgins are like dragons, you know they exist, somewhere in the universe, but you never see them,”

And then before that, while they were playing the game and Zacky has to kiss Matt's dick: just don’t move, it will sense your fear <------- I'm still pissing myself from that line!

I'm subscribing and recommending! This was incredible. :) What else have you written? ;D

Holy. Fucking. Shit. That was PERFECTION, not just the too sexy Avenged gang bag. But the portrayal of Jimmy ad all the funny parts.

I bow down before you.

Totally not expecting that. So good. Now off to your other stuff!

So seriously before I read anymore I just wanted to tell you that I'm trying SO damn hard not to laugh because my boyfriend is sleeping. Yeah. This is the greatest.

...there are no words I can say that haven't already been said. I really REALLY fucking love this! A sequel would definitely be interesting. But good god girl, your stories are amazing!

Forget cold shower. I'm about to just go for a swim in... whatever the coldest ocean is. And even then, I'm not sure that will be enough. Damn that was... so indescribably amazing and perfect and sexy. I'm so... you know this just isn't right but gods I love you for posting it. And I'm very thrilled my friend made me read this. And I'm very jealous of Jess. And I think I give up writing smut. I should bow out before I embarrass myself any further with that child's play I tried calling smut. You m'dear are Queen of all that is dirty, raunchy, sensual sex.

Add that to the wickedly hilarious dialogue in the beginning and this is by far my favourite one-shot ever. I feel no shame in admitting to bookmarking this for later. Now, I'm off to bed where I'm sure this will wreck any dreams I have tonight. I love it.

I haven't read this yet, but I'm subscribed for future readings and I'm pretty sure that once I read it, I'm going to have a heart attack and die like when I read all of your smut. <3 From the comments above me it sounds deliciously amazing.

And that's all I have to say right now. :3

This is definitely one of the best one-shots I have EVER read. It was so dirty, yet beautifully written and you kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. It is incredible. You should seriously get an award or something for this!
I know everyone else has pretty much said all of that already, but holy cow.... It's just so hot....
Seriously. Good job. (Even though good isn't a good enough word....)

This has to be the most filthy, dirtiest & hottest story I have ever read! I LOVED every single bit of it!!! Such a masterpiece!!! Congrats for such a great work!!!

I. Am. At. A. Loss. For. Words..... Amazing, can that happen in real life please lol... I agree with whoever said it should be a story!!

This is ... holy shit.. How the hell do you do this?
That is probably the most dirtiest smut i've read, it made me blush..
I'm not even going to try and write a smut story now, nothing can beat this!

Very well written :D

This was... amazing! The best one-shot I've ever read. O.O
I.. I... I don't even know what to say! Amazing job! *.*