A Lonely Road - Comments

so amazing
:X
you should write a sequel for this
please

*Jaw dropped, breathing escalated, drool escaping*
OMFG!
THAT WAS SERIOUSLY THE MOST WICKED, HOTTEST BIT OF SMUT I HAVE EVER LAID EYES UPON!
*now that she has said her piece, eyes flutter shut and she faints*

I am not even..... damn I can't even...... fuck....

Damn!
Jess is one lucky girl who turned out to be virgin!
I bet that was a plus for the guys because they could give her a mind blowing experience for her first time and no one could compare at all!
This has got to be the most exhilarating oneshot smut I have ever read!
You know you really should consider making this into a full length or a shot at that.
And the way you ended Matt and Brian claiming her since they saw her first.
Now all Jimmy, Johnny and Zacky could look forward is the video that they recorded! lol
This the is amazing and hilarious!
AWESOME JOB!!!!!

OMG, that was beyond amazing! I need a cold shower, or three, after reading that. It NEEDS to be made into a full-length story!

Okay so... Uh... That was ... I mean... I don't even... Goddamn okay ?!!!!
I can't find the right words and you just fucked my brain up ^^

I thought I would read that before going to bed and Jesus Lord that was such a bad idea :O
I need to change my sheets ^^

I need.. I don't even know... SO GOOOOOD, SO EXTREMELY HOT, and that is an insult because hot doesn't even begin to express just how amazing this was !!

And I wish I could speak English perfectly and fluently so I could tell you how good of a writer you are but my Frenchie self ain't that good, si I hope those few words are enough

Jesus Christ WOMAN !!!

This one shot was beyond amazing me :)
I couldn't stop reading it.
You're one amazing writer

seriously the best 1 shot I have ever read totally amazing you should totally write romance novels or erotica or something anyways I loved it keep up the good work :)

seriously the best 1 shot I have ever read totally amazing you should totally write romance novels or erotica or something anyways I loved it keep up the good work :)

Holy shit. That may have been...one of THE best oneshots I've ever read.

I honestly think I'm gonna die. I have the extreme need to fuck a band member. Specifically Matt. Oh shit ...

Woman, I'm sending you the bill for ruining my panties. Like holy fucking shit woman, that was the most disturbingly incredible smut I've ever read. That smut was absolutely amazing. The beginning was a little weak, because it was kind of confusing. You obviously had a back story you figured out for Jess (good for you on that, a lot of mibba writers ignore that kind of thing) but I think the story might have benefited from a little more elaboration on that. It'd reveal a little more of Jessica before she undergoes the experience we've all secretly thought about in the shower...or that may have just been me. Damn. Okay, but I love how you worked some random hilarity into the story, although I did not enjoy Zacky being a little pussy about squirting. We all know ZV is one kinky ass mother fucker; he'd be all over that shit lol. Just saying...But I loved this. It actually worked all together, with the awkward moments being worked in so it was strangely realistic haha. It might worth exploring another chapter or two...

that's it. i quit writing. no one can beat this.
filthiest smut i have ever read and with all the guys at once!
my god. squirting! lololol now thats something you don't read every day.
damn brian was really hot in this. he knows how to work his hands for sure. jimmy was just a jump for joy about everything! matt was very dominant and is not afraid to try new things haha. zacky was a bit of a bum in not liking how she came, only natural dude. don't be a sour puss! & johnny was adorable!
my god. i read this last night half a sleep and my eyes were widening and now im fall on awake and my eyes have popped out of their sockets!!!!
ownership of matt and brian uh? who wouldn't want that!
oh my gosh. i need several cold showers and new underwear and a freezing cold bucket chucked in my face every five minutes! you've totally out done everyone in the smut department...fucking hell xD

I forgot to say! This should be a story :)
Buuut I dunno it might be just me, I just thought it would turn out
to be a good one. With all the drama between Matt & Brian and all <3
And then she has to pick one! And- yeah i'm talking to much.. Sorry.
Love it though... :)

Oh my lord... I think i've died.. wait no I think I am dead..
Daayum.
That was amazing :3
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I actually read this last night, but my dad turned the internet off just as I was about to comment.

But FUCKING HELL.

I-...there are literally no words.

Seriously.
I was sat about 3 inches from my screen reading this and just good fucking lord.
You are the god of all fanfiction.  

For the love of god, I beg you to never, ever stop writing. 

holy...shit...

Not only are my ovaries dead, but so is my uterus...dead...

*is dead*

i... i... eh.. what is my name again?? i... think my brain exploded.. wow.. to read that before going to bed... wow.. now that sevenfold-sandwich-thingy got a whole new meaning... first reading Nigthmare with meany-shadows and gates, and then this one after... *falls off chair*

Oh. My. God. no words can describe how good this was. Amazing!

Honestly that was so Epicly FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC that I read it 5 more times!!!! Delicious story! ^~^