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  • Ilovea7x

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    It gets better as it goes keep going ^_^
    December 19th, 2011 at 09:35am
  • CountSynula

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    Hehehe I will try to update tonight.The next scene will be intense and will take a bit of effort to write.
    December 18th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    i wonder if she was pretending to be alseep when he showered and waited until he left the room...it started off like a good plan.

    more soon please

    <3
    December 18th, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Oh god
    I hope Brian catches her before Matt does
    Update soon

    :}
    December 18th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • mirandaaaa818

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    oh lawdy.. she just needs to stay put.. she's gonna kill herself!!!
    December 18th, 2011 at 11:07am
  • McKenna Haner

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    OMG Brian POV!!! Something's gonna happen
    December 18th, 2011 at 02:43am
  • fienix66613

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    good god!! that pic on ch. 12 of brian is smokin fuckin hott!!!! i wud do him in a heartbeat. please more
    December 18th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Ouch! That must have been a bitch having ger tooth yanked out like that. But it could have been worse. But what did he do? Damn cliffhangers. Can't wait for more! :D
    December 17th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    Owie that's gotta hurt. WHAT DOES HE DO
    December 17th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • mirandaaaa818

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    I want to know what he does!!! and at least she doesn't have to pay to go to the dentist now ;) lol
    December 17th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    this story's so weird but i love it. i have no idea where it's going and that's so refreshing to find. although this whole pulling teeth chapter's gonna give me nightmares lol.

    i have one thing to comment about. when you write dialogue and put quotation marks around them, you only need to do that when you change speakers. so if you have brian for example saying i hate you. matt needs to die. i like ice cream. it should have one set of quotation marks around all three sentences, otherwise it makes it really hard to follow.

    "i hate you. matt needs to die. i like ice cream," Brian said.

    then if you have matt reply it's the same thing.

    just figure i'd share

    <3
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • CountSynula

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    Thanks love!!
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    I had removed by a dentist that hurt like hell
    I can't imagine how bad it would have been to have them ripped out with plyers
    Poor Morgan
    What the hell did she do to deserve all this?
    Update soon

    :}
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • Miss Eerie

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    Love love loved the torture
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • BabyDollBlue

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    Just found this at I LOVE it!!!!
    December 17th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • McKenna Haner

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    WHAT'S IN DA BASEMENT?!?!?!
    December 16th, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • fienix66613

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    o wow i wonder what the hell will happen? more please
    December 16th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Damn, what's in the basement? I want to know what they're gonna do! -_- Oh well, that picture takes away my frustration lol. Great update. :)
    December 16th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    I'm thinking there are some torture devices
    No matter what's down there Morgan is not going to enjoy the out come
    Update soon

    :}
    December 16th, 2011 at 06:28pm
  • Miss Eerie

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    That was greeeattt!!! :D
    December 16th, 2011 at 04:40am
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