He raped her. :( Though it probably makes ne sound like a slut, I wouldn't have fought him. Anyway, why Brian be mean? I like nice BriBri lol. Great update. :)
MY NAME IS MORGAN o.O Does this mean I'm going to be kidnapped by A7X at a point in my life? ANYWAYYYSS. Brian's being all nice and cute-like. Loved the update!!
I have tiny bit constructive criticism The quotes when is kind of confusing so instead I sugest using italics instead [*i] ~ [*/i] just take out the * the words where the ~ is Also sometimes you "? It looks better this way ?" Hopefully that will help with your reporting problem
I LOVE the story so far Brian is super sexy It's awesome how he's helping her Update soon
So this wasn't what I was expecting it to turn out to be.. I thought they were going to be cool not try to kill her lol I just want her and Brian to get together already! ;)
Brian can punish me all he want. ;) I'd beg for it lol. He's just fucking gorgeous. Anyway, great update. But who's Mr. T? I also pictured the guy from TV lol.