Theres a Story at the Bottom of this Bottle - Comments

  • Nanook

    Nanook (125)

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    So I just stumbled across this story and read what you have of it... I really like it so far. I'm bummed to see it was never continued. :/ You also deserved way more feedback than you got for it; I'm surprised it only got four comments, like what? :O
    It was a unique concept with the whole blog thing, and now I'm wondering how things turned out. It left off with Alex being mad at her, which is a bummer because it'll probably be a while, if ever, that this is updated again. Probably a bit lame to assume it will be again, but I have faith that you could do so. :) I've seen it done before.
    I also liked the concept of her knowing Blink-182. XD That was cute, even if it did end up being a cause of the riff between her and Alex. :/ I'm also wondering who the secret admirer was. :O Although I have a pretty strong feeling of who, you never got to the update that revealed that. :/
    I assume things at least end up civil between her and Alex (judging by the blog entry side of it), if not better than that, so I guess I can't really complain there; there can be an assumed answer. But, yeah, it's not concrete, which is why I would still enjoy seeing this continued.
    If you ever choose to pick it up again, I will be here to read and leave feedback. I think you're an amazing writer, and definitely didn't get enough credit as you were actively writing this. You deserved more.
    And... yeah, I see you've posted other stories, so I may check those out as well. Even though it's been years since you've posted, I just thought I would leave feedback to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your stuff, and would still be here to read if you do ever choose to write on here again.
    At the very least, I hope you're still writing on your own time, because you definitely have a skill for it and I'd hate if that went to waste. <3
    Great job with what you had of this; I'll be here.
    July 19th, 2017 at 10:50am
  • PhoebeAnna

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    Why did you stop updating? This story is brilliant! You're such a good writer, I swear your ideas are freakin' amazing.
    April 15th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    I miss this story! More chapters pleassee!
    February 24th, 2012 at 04:17am
  • heeytara

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    I waaanna see more alexxxanderr
    December 27th, 2011 at 08:20am
  • heeytara

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    alex alex alex. she needs to end up with alex.
    December 23rd, 2011 at 09:38pm