Altered for the Altar - Comments

Please update soon! I miss this story so much D:

I can't even begin to explain how much I just love this! I keep checking back for the next update and I hope it's soon! :)

I'd kind of fallen off the agin of reading this (back around chapter fourteen), but I ABSOLUTELY LOVE what you've done with this. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again soon!

How am I just finding this? Seriously. It's amazing! I can't wait for the next update!

Great chapter lots on new information. I am interested in the war Elizabeth dad is involved in. I think Elizabeth will lie to Draco but he will eventually find out. I am excited for her to meet new people such as Lupin, but it will be a struggle for her to betray them all.

Oh gosh great chapter, I hope she can't keep it from Draco because I feel like he would protect her no matter what. Her parents are really wrong for basically using her for their own agenda and she gets nothing out of it really. I mean Dracos parents really do love him, but what about hers?

Great chapter!!!! It's getting exciting, I can wait for me.

Thanks for taking the time to update (:

This update was wonderful. The new levels of intricacy that are being added are exciting :)

If she doesn't come back, I might cry. She just has to!!! OR Draco will have to go and kidnap her!! Lovely story by the way. I couldn't stop reading it once I started! Update soon :)

OMG this just can't get any better, dear Jesus I hope she comes back and I hope she comes back stronger! Maybe has some magical tricks of her own soon!

Recently found this story and have just started to read it. So far it seems really good, but I'd like to point out one thing that I noticed. That little quirk I noticed was that you tend to put apostrophes in words that are simply plural, and not contractions or possessive. Like putting that someone doesn't care what 'other's thought' when it should be they don't care what 'others thought'. Or putting American's instead of Americans. Or comment's instead of comments.

Also, in chapter 2, you have her say that she's 'apart' of this, and that made me smile slightly since you meant 'a part' of this. She wishes to be 'apart' of that. Although in chapter 2 I'm also confused since you put 'fathers close proximity', which is kind of a change from the first chapter, since that's an instance where an apostrophe should have been used, but wasn't.

All in all your biggest issue is little odds and ends, but more often than not apostrophes are what trip you up. Although usually its vs it's is done well, but not always. Also, sometimes questions are oddly worded. “What has who I’m going to invite have anything to do with anything?” should have probably been worded as, "What does who I'm going to invite here to do with anything?" Although I'm not 100% on that. "Is his going to keep you all around just because you faithfully fought for him? Highly unlikely.” should definitely be, "Is he going to keep you all around just because you faithfully fought for him? Highly unlikely."

So most of the errors are minor things like that, and if it were any other site, I'd probably just let it slide, but mibba guidelines do indicate that correct grammar and punctuation should be adhered to.

she will come back OR Draco will go get her, I am hoping for the latter to be honest. Loved the kissed, we are getting there :)
I really don't like her dad, well her parents in general gah.

SHE BEST COME BACK!
Draco and her were finally falling for each other and he cares and she cares and ughh
And the kiss! Gahhhh

She better come back!!!!! Things were just starting to get SO good for them, at least Draco cares about her....not like her god awful parents.

That kissed sounded like it could have turned into something more, if the timing had be better.

Thanks for taking the time to update (:

I looooove it!!!! I'm not a Draco fan at all, but I couldn't stop reading once I started.

You write everyone SO well, and I can't wait for your next update (:

Some super cute moments between Draco and Elizabeth in this chapter. I'm excited for the wedding, because they are slowly falling for each other and the wedding might be blissful. It be super cool is Elizabeth finally got a hand on a wand as well.

Some super cute moments between Draco and Elizabeth in this chapter. I'm excited for the wedding, because they are slowly falling for each other and the wedding might be blissful. It be super cool is Elizabeth finally got a hand on a wand as well.

YAASSSS

I jut love how their relationship is developing, Draco could have stopped caring for her back at the manor. There will be a bump in the road at some point soon but I love that the two are slowly falling for one another.

Oh god there go all my feels down the drain.
The kiss.
Draco.
Elizabeth.
Too. Much. To. Handle.
Agggghhhhh
Update moreee!