Altered for the Altar - Comments

Wonderful. I really like your style with this tale, and, of course, Voldemort is spot on, as is Snape.

When you described that sick feeling she had, I couldn't help but feel it too. This isn't cliche at all and is always beautiful written.

This is beautifully written. I love where you're going with the plot and how you handle each approaching situation. The characters you have developed are very well described too. Overall it's realistic and true to your word that you won't make this story cliché. I'm definitely subscribing because this story makes e happy, and I don't tend to read arranged marriages. Nice. :)

I really like it (: update soon!

I was so happy to find that you had written a Draco story - I love Draco romances haha. I absolutely love your story, and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. Keep it up, I'm subscribed! =D

I just found this and I like it! Can't wait for you to upload more :)

Who died? That's the only question in my head as of right now,"Who Died?"

Anyway, I love this story. It is wonderfully written, and I think you have Draco in character, though it is always hard to tell, because Draco is hardly ever kind in the series. I like how kind she is to Leal, and how kind Draco is to her.

This is so nicely written, I love it! Can't wait for more(:
I love Draco too, none of my friends understand why I like him so much!

I can't wait for more!

Wow, Draco is really good to her. The hold holding her hand got me. I can't wait for more, this is great :)

Oh my goodness! That was so cool how you described everything! :D And I think her and Draco are becoming closer? I love how he grabbed her hand when Voldemort killed the man. It made me go Awww! Even though someone just died...>.>

Great update!

Just found this and I really like it! I'm curious to see where it goes. Hope you update more soon :)

Love love the layout. c:
I would have never read a Draco Malfoy story but yours got me into it.
The arranged marriage is just perfect. c:
I love it. Update soon.

*o* The layout is too cute. Draco Malfoy, I have no idea who that is. I see this is an arranged marriage story, but it doesn't seem cliche to me. I love the way you word things out. Your description is amazing. I don't know about the others, but when I read this there was little boxes everywhere.

Like: Didn(enter box square thing here)t. Stuff like that. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I like this. I still don't know who that is. I'm going to have to google him. Good job!

The first thing I have to say is that the layout is amazingly beautiful. I'm so jealous! It seems to fit the story...somehow. I'm on the second chapter, but seriously, I wanna smack the chicks parents. Cold as hell >.<'

The chapters that I've read are beautifully and perfectly written. I don't look deep into those grammar mistakes, but I catch a lot of them. For this story, I didn't find ANY! I also appreciate how long the chapters are. Almost all the arranged marriages on here have such short chapters and I'm like "Really?"

So. Yeah. I'm sorry this comments not long enough :/ I have other stories to comment on D: But good luck with this story, it'll go far :D

Excellent update; is this a new layout??? I'm not sure, but it seems different, and I like it. If it's not new or different...well, I still like your layout. XD

OOOO, time to meet the Dark Lord...oh dear, I'm scared for the poor girl. Do be gentle with her...XD

Anyways, great job! Another awesome chapter!

I seriously love this. I can't wait for you to update. I've already subscribed.

Sometimes it is a bit wordy. And I feel like you may be lost in this story now. It seems like you had your plot down at first and it's a little jumbled now but I'm sure you'll get back on track!

Whatever you come up with next I'm sure it'll leave me wanting more.

Great update! I'm quite terrified for her...What's going to happen?!

I love this, Draco seems rather kind to her. I can't wait for more.

First I gotta say
I love your story layout

Anywho
I thought this was a very interesting story to say the least.
I'm a huge fan of Draco Malfoy
You have written good descriptions
Also it flowed very well

I can't wait to see more
Keep up the good work
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